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Finger Prints

As I sit in dreamy wonder, watch the world outside my door, my mind wanders to the time we spent secretly yearning more Your hands caressed my body your soul caressed my heart your mind made love to me in ways I never thought would part but the days grew stormy and dark clouds came the lightening filled the skies the thunder growled and boomed overhead and teardrops filled my eyes when the storms had passed and you were gone I knew it for the best, but your love embedded fingerprints on this heart inside my chest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/18/2009 5:38:00 PM
all we truely love leave impressions on our hearts...so well put! Light & Love
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Date: 6/18/2009 12:14:00 PM
Beautifully flow to this poem Trudy, moving, touching, loving and so much more>>James
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Date: 6/18/2009 12:09:00 PM
Those fingerprints will last forever, Trudy, but the pain will subside. When I think of my late husband, I can now get beyond the pain of loss by concentrating on the happiness we had. Hope you are able to emerge from the "stormy and dark clouds" with gratitude that you had such a meaningful love. Excellent write -- brought back memories of the years I spent grieving. Now I look back and thank God he was part of my life. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt expression. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 6/16/2009 7:50:00 PM
I like how it rhymes.
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Date: 6/16/2009 4:12:00 PM
Sigh..and sigh again. Lovely. BG
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Date: 6/16/2009 1:27:00 PM
Trudy, your phrasing is wonderful and filled with love! thanks always for comments!! your friend, jim
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Date: 6/16/2009 8:40:00 AM
Trudy this is a fantastic poem with a very special ending - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 6/16/2009 7:02:00 AM
So much romance in this lovely write, Trudy! Love, Carrie
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:44:00 PM
Very nice Trudy ... Very nice.
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:33:00 PM
Beautiful.
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Date: 6/15/2009 8:28:00 PM
The only thing that I can say is that I truly know how you feel. Wonderful write. Lots of Love, Misty
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