Fine Lines

“That’s a pretty fine line,” I said to the man drawing lines so fine,
“Would you like to give it try?” he asked, “You can add to my design.”

He handed me his fine line marker and I made a couple of quick tries,
They weren’t anywhere nearly as fine as his but that was no surprise.

Because the lines that he drew in his art came from a practiced hand,
And just because you have a guitar it doesn’t mean you’re in the band.

Then he looked at me and said, “Art is something that you have to feel,
You have to give yourself over to your art before it can be real.” 

There’s a fine line between an artist and a guy who just likes to draw,
And knowing where to draw that line was something that the artist saw.

So I’ll write lines of poetry hoping that some will turn out fine,
But every once in while it would be nice to touch upon sublime.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Brown Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 8:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in the "Fine Line" contest Tony. Love, Carol
Poet Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:44 PM
A wonderful write from you Tony.Congrats on your win.
Mehta Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 12:21 PM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Nancy, Tony
Devonshire Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 2:28 AM
Tony, you DO touch upon sublime! This poem is a work of art if ever I read one. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
Ramage Avatar
October 1, 2011 at 1:05 AM
Great poem Tony, and one that i truly understand. I used to paint and thought I was pretty good, until I took a watercolour class and realized I knew nothing about painting and most of what i had done, was no more than someone sketching a painting. Lee
Jones Avatar
September 30, 2011 at 8:49 PM
You know, Tony, I often find myself wanting to meet the people in your poems.. you build such engaging characters in so few words, and then pack in a little wisdom to boot. Thanks so much for the write and for supporting my contest. Beauty weekend to ya. Namaste~N
Johnson Avatar
September 28, 2011 at 6:03 PM
you done got the sublime, and a quaint llttle story, a flowing fine, well diddly did done friend of mine....
Sweetheart Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 11:22 AM
super take on the theme Tony of fine lines.. one of my sons is an artist and he would luv these lines ..will share.. good luck in the contest.. like the way u brought poetry into it at the end..luv..
Merryman Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 10:20 AM
Another work of art, Tony. Good luck in the contest. Kim
Johnson Avatar
September 26, 2011 at 10:15 AM
Clever entry Topny. Way to go. good luck in contest. Joyce
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