Fine Line Between Sane and Insane

There is a fine line between sane and insane.
It is so small its hard for us to explain.
We all have our little quirks and ticks.
But were are not insane, its nothing to fix.

There isn't a single person who hasn't had crazy thoughts.
We just don't talk about them, that's what we are taught.
When we meet people we keep it locked inside.
We push our tendencies down and if asked we lied.

How many of us over-reacted to a broken heart?
Calling your ex a thousand times, that's the crazy part.
Or getting mistreated or fired from the place you work.
You know what you wanted to do to that boss or jerk.

And how many of us have been called neat freaks?
Its because that little voice inside us always speaks.
Don't you think that is just a tad bit strange?
I am not trying to point out that you maybe deranged.

My point is, we all have our moments of doubt.
Were not sure if were insane, but we never let it out.
We show others what we want them to see, the rest is buried.
Women let it come out after your together forever and married.

***For Nancy Jones' contest, “Fine line between...”

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 9/28/2011 4:09:00 PM
ALL THE BEST CHRIS ! VICTORY IS YOURS...A MARVELLOUS WRITE FOR SURE
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Date: 9/28/2011 8:04:00 AM
Chris I wish you the best in the contest.Love, Carol
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