Fine

It's fine, isn't it?
no? it's not?
well, okay then
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October 11, 2024 at 11:45 PM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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August 9, 2016 at 12:35 AM
State your reason, Hadiyani.... Anyways, flourish you will... write poetry ....enjoy... Skat
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August 6, 2016 at 11:17 AM
Hadiyani, I have a question,...why would you join this site with rubbish? It makes no sense This is a poetry site, one of the best. I'm disappointed, because I came with goodness to greet the new poets. Sadden, by what you think should be a post for a new poet. I hope you consider in posting poetry. With all respects. Linda
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August 6, 2016 at 10:44 AM
Hafiyani, you conquered this site... Joining spot on...Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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