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Finds a Piece of Flint

finds a piece of flint
sits chipping away at it 
such concentration
proudly holds his arrow head
dreams of being a hunter

(a stone age boy)

Jack Horne

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2011 8:53:00 AM

Very creative work..I can just see the scene..Enjoyed reading this one this morn..Thanks for stopping by..On the form of poetry sapphic stanza, I just tried to write one..It is not correct..I am expecting someone to correct me or try to help me get it right..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/1/2011 7:59:00 AM

Soup Mail Jack...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/31/2011 9:11:00 PM

This is unique and dare I say it? DARLING!

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/31/2011 4:39:00 PM

hey there jack, np periods or punctuation, tanka & haiku come off same branch so no title, no capitalization. It is a mood poem and you set a fine mood! [use line 1 in the title spot ---finds a piece of flint] Light & Love

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/31/2011 1:36:00 PM

very cool write you have here, Jack-- could just imagine that boy's excitement :)

James Foulk

Date: 5/30/2011 9:52:00 AM

a great piece of creation, by a fine poet.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/30/2011 6:53:00 AM

cool throw back on the project but we are still the same boys now aren't we Jack. I enjoyed the subject matter of this Tanka. entertaining and puts the reader right there. very well done !

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 5/29/2011 7:22:00 PM

A boy's dreams change over eons..but yet they are the same.. I really enjoyed this...BG

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/29/2011 4:27:00 PM

very cool creative write Jack..if for Nette's contest good luck.. name at bottom of poem is her request in rules luv.. awesome thoughts..