Samantha Garnes Poet Light Verse

Finding Yourself

Sometimes you may find struggle
At times when you're all alone
and haven't found the one above
'Cause you're too in love that 
You put everything aside
Even if that means not being the true you inside
What shall you do? 
Praying would do some good
If you ever want to make it to Hollywood.

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 1, 2010 at 9:57 AM Congratulations on a well earned featured write this week Samantha. Love, Carol

Daniel Cwiak October 30, 2010 at 9:17 PM Interesting write, Samantha. Much introspection can be gained from your words and thoughts. Keep the pen flowing! Dan C ps. Thanks for your comments on my work.

Samantha Garnes October 30, 2010 at 1:44 PM thn you for all the cmments..i eally appreciate it. : . )

October 29, 2010 at 1:34 PM The emotion comes through your words in this one. You may want to change Prayig to Praying in the eighth line. Welcome to Poetry Soup. Best wishes with your writing. Thank you for your kind comment. Karen

Carol Sunshine Brown October 29, 2010 at 12:44 PM Thank you for posting your excellent poetry here at PoetrySoup so we all may read it Samantha. May your weekend be one of much joy to you and may it bring inspiration to the end of your pen. Wishing you the best in any contestd you have entered or are going to enter this weekend. Love, Carol