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Finding True Faith Is Like Mall Shopping

Finding true faith Like going to mall Spent few hours. Go round and shop Your eyes busy Your feet is numb. When all is done With good judgement Finding your choice. No further fuss At last you bet To settle down. Once and for all You buy the thing Mall has offer.

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/2/2025 4:23:00 PM

Hello Hugo, You buy what you need. or you buy what you want. Or need item on sale. Mjuch love here. /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 6/3/2025 11:10:00 AM

Hello Hugo, Oh! Okay now it makes sense. Much love here. /Darlene/

Hugo Sarvida Jr.
Date: 6/3/2025 4:38:00 AM

This is metaphorically poem based. I regard faith like choosing your religion to mall shopping. One may find faith by hopping from faith to faith. Until, one can finally decide where he is fit to settle down and love his religion. Thank you, Darlene. I love you more. /Hugo.