Hugo Sarvida Jr. Poet Than-Bauk

Finding True Faith Is Like Mall Shopping

Finding true faith 
Like going to mall
Spent few hours.

Go round and shop
Your eyes busy
Your feet is numb.

When all is done
With good judgement
Finding your choice.

No further fuss
At last you bet
To settle down.

Once and for all
You buy the thing
Mall has offer.

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 2, 2025 at 4:23 PM Hello Hugo, You buy what you need. or you buy what you want. Or need item on sale. Mjuch love here. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu June 3, 2025 at 11:10 AM Hello Hugo, Oh! Okay now it makes sense. Much love here. /Darlene/ Hugo Sarvida Jr. June 3, 2025 at 4:38 AM This is metaphorically poem based. I regard faith like choosing your religion to mall shopping. One may find faith by hopping from faith to faith. Until, one can finally decide where he is fit to settle down and love his religion. Thank you, Darlene. I love you more. /Hugo.