Finding Serenity

Decorations hanging, lights and tree
                              A festive home of warmth for me
                                        Gratitude is all around
                                     But, there is no-one found
                                      Lonely thoughts creep in
                                                Moving the joy
                                                      To a far
                                                        Empty 
                                                        Place
                                                         Then
                                                        A note
                                                   Comes along
                                                   From another
                                               Message in a song
                                               Singing only for me
                                     Then all special things around
                                     Bring new comfort with clarity
                                           Our celebration, serenity

Heidi Sands

12/12/20

Placed 2nd in the Double Nonet Poetry Contest.  Sponsor:  William Kakaula
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Kendrick Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 5:12 AM
It is the season. I did not do much this year and have enjoyed seeing the scenes in our town what little I have gotten to see them because I did not decorate. Congrats on your winner. Sara
Sands Avatar
December 22, 2020 at 7:28 AM
Thank you Sara. I am the only house around with lights and decorations. I hope all is well :)
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 6:59 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Heidi, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
Sands Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 7:28 PM
Thank you very much William :)
Theraven Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 8:23 AM
Heidi, Lovely Nonet waiting the miracle of Christmas, a place where all belong. A sweet mistletoe anticipat'd kiss, carolers voices lifted in song. -Richard
Sands Avatar
December 16, 2020 at 11:29 AM
Hi Richard. Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well and you have a nice Christmas! :)
Ibeh Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 12:24 PM
I feel the peacefulness in your marvelous write, Heidi!:-) Bravo!
Sands Avatar
December 14, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Thank you Edward. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
May Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 11:31 AM
A message of comfort in a Christmas song, Wonderful write Heidi..
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:30 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. I cannot get the line positioning right on this. I appreciate your comment :)
Babcock Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 9:28 AM
Wonderful poem and wishing you a Merry Christmas. Will be sad up here as we are only allowed 5 people in the house for Christmas unless they lift the limit by Christmas. Sad times. love phyl
Sands Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 12:29 PM
Hi Phyllis. I am sorry to hear about the limitations. I know on Thanksgiving here, they advised 'no-one' to go to other homes. It is sad. Thank you for your kind comment. I wish you a Merry Christmas :)
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:49 PM
Hello Heidi, Christmas is a time to celebrate with the family. Emotions will be high on Christmas. enjoy your evening . hugs Darlene
De Beaulieu Avatar
December 13, 2020 at 11:52 AM
Hello Heidi, yes Christmas will be different this year. We are only allowed the family members in the same house hold to celebrate Christmas this year. Hugs Darlene
Sands Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 4:29 PM
True Darlene. Thank you for your kind comment on this, my friend. I hope you have a nice evening also. Take care :)
Pandit Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Wonderful images of the festive season you created Heidi. Emotions resonate to happy ending--apt for the season.
Sands Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:46 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment and kind feedback :)
Devonshire Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:36 PM
I'm so glad someone came along in song, Heidi. Being with someone special makes Christmas so much better. You did a great job on your nonet! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
Sands Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Thank you Carolyn. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all Is well :)
Y. Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 1:43 PM
Hi Heidi, You have penned a good entry for the contest. Great message about one finding serenity.Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis
Sands Avatar
December 12, 2020 at 2:44 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. I appreciate your kind comment :)
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