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Finding Serenity

Decorations hanging, lights and tree A festive home of warmth for me Gratitude is all around But, there is no-one found Lonely thoughts creep in Moving the joy To a far Empty Place Then A note Comes along From another Message in a song Singing only for me Then all special things around Bring new comfort with clarity Our celebration, serenity Heidi Sands 12/12/20 Placed 2nd in the Double Nonet Poetry Contest. Sponsor: William Kakaula

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Date: 12/22/2020 5:12:00 AM
It is the season. I did not do much this year and have enjoyed seeing the scenes in our town what little I have gotten to see them because I did not decorate. Congrats on your winner. Sara
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/22/2020 7:28:00 AM
Thank you Sara. I am the only house around with lights and decorations. I hope all is well :)
Date: 12/21/2020 6:59:00 PM
Thank you for sharing a wondrous part of yourself, Heidi, my compliments on your honorable placement, Aloha! William
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/21/2020 7:28:00 PM
Thank you very much William :)
Date: 12/16/2020 8:23:00 AM
Heidi, Lovely Nonet waiting the miracle of Christmas, a place where all belong. A sweet mistletoe anticipat'd kiss, carolers voices lifted in song. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/16/2020 11:29:00 AM
Hi Richard. Thank you very much. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all is well and you have a nice Christmas! :)
Date: 12/14/2020 12:24:00 PM
I feel the peacefulness in your marvelous write, Heidi!:-) Bravo!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/14/2020 1:34:00 PM
Thank you Edward. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 12/13/2020 11:31:00 AM
A message of comfort in a Christmas song, Wonderful write Heidi..
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 12:30:00 PM
Thank you so much Joseph. I cannot get the line positioning right on this. I appreciate your comment :)
Date: 12/13/2020 9:28:00 AM
Wonderful poem and wishing you a Merry Christmas. Will be sad up here as we are only allowed 5 people in the house for Christmas unless they lift the limit by Christmas. Sad times. love phyl
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/13/2020 12:29:00 PM
Hi Phyllis. I am sorry to hear about the limitations. I know on Thanksgiving here, they advised 'no-one' to go to other homes. It is sad. Thank you for your kind comment. I wish you a Merry Christmas :)
Date: 12/12/2020 2:49:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Christmas is a time to celebrate with the family. Emotions will be high on Christmas. enjoy your evening . hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 12/13/2020 11:52:00 AM
Hello Heidi, yes Christmas will be different this year. We are only allowed the family members in the same house hold to celebrate Christmas this year. Hugs Darlene
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2020 4:29:00 PM
True Darlene. Thank you for your kind comment on this, my friend. I hope you have a nice evening also. Take care :)
Date: 12/12/2020 2:40:00 PM
Wonderful images of the festive season you created Heidi. Emotions resonate to happy ending--apt for the season.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2020 2:46:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. I appreciate your comment and kind feedback :)
Date: 12/12/2020 2:36:00 PM
I'm so glad someone came along in song, Heidi. Being with someone special makes Christmas so much better. You did a great job on your nonet! Best wishes in the contest, Carolyn
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2020 2:45:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn. I appreciate your kind comment. I hope all Is well :)
Date: 12/12/2020 1:43:00 PM
Hi Heidi, You have penned a good entry for the contest. Great message about one finding serenity.Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Heidi Sands
Date: 12/12/2020 2:44:00 PM
Thank you very much Alexis. I appreciate your kind comment :)

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