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Finding Peace

Isn’t it a wonder, how
letting in the slap of the tide
to rest against the walls of your skin
reverberate with peacefulness
calming the days vibration
easing the stress

Isn’t it a blessing, how
Looking out over the wide bay
Towards the distant islands in blue
Softens your lips of compressed lines
Makes your breath a deep haven
Shredding anxiety

Isn’t it a sorrowful memory, how
The voice of a bagpipes bellows
Catches in your throat
As Amazing Grace drifts into the sky
Leaving notes of love, family and friends
Creating connection

Isn’t it like a lovers caress, how
The sun’s slowing sinking orb
Sends to you golden hues of love
Reflected in your eyes and felt
Softly, upon your upturned face
Granting you peace

08-31-2022

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Date: 2/22/2023 10:12:00 AM
The sun is slowly showing itself. Nearly time to take two layers of clothes off.
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Date: 9/2/2022 10:10:00 PM
Such a calming soothing enjoyable Poem Jeanne it was a pleasure to read thank you for sharing...
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Date: 9/1/2022 11:06:00 AM
Reminded me of, "Danny Boy" (the pipes, the pipes are calling, from glen to glen, and down the mountainside) to arms rather than to peace, but well thought and done Jeanne! Aloha!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 9/1/2022 8:54:00 PM
Aloha Rico. I was on the beach when a fellow started playing...it was magic at sunset. I'm glad you got hit with it too. :D
Date: 9/1/2022 10:57:00 AM
Jeanne, isn't this just a wonderful gem! Love the bagpipes reference. They always stir something very deep in my Celtic heart. So happy to see you back in the soup doing the backstroke! Blessings! Welcome back.
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