Finding My Way

Hello darkness, my old friend Just when my heart is on the mend I realize I’ve built walls And no one listens to my calls When times get rough And friends just can’t be found Walls close in, I’ve had enough I wish I was homeward bound I wander empty streets down Past the shop displays In my own tears I drown Only in memories, my home stays So I shrug my shoulders And walk off to look for America The road ahead is filled with boulders Steeper than the walls of Attica A pocket full of mumbles, Broken promises I carry today As thunder from a storm rumbles Only with God’s help, I find my way
*For Tracie’s “Sing a Song a Poem” contest *Group – Simon and Garfunkel “Hello darkness my old friend…” from “Sounds of Silence” “I’ve built walls…” from “I Am a Rock” “When times get rough and friends just can’t be found…” from “Bridge over Troubled Water” “I wish I was homeward bound…” from “Homeward Bound” “I wander empty streets down, past the shop displays…” from “For Emily Whenever I May Find Her" “And walk off to look for America…” from “America” “A pocket full of mumbles…” from “The Boxer”
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March 27, 2012 at 1:25 PM
Musical braids from the most beautiful of poets...memory lane has been traveled once again! Congrats on a very special win...the competition looked stiff and your unique work shone through! Love, GWendolen
Brown Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 11:41 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Tracie's contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
Horsman Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Oh girl this is wonderful, i've sure missed lots of your poetry, lately because of time, but this is a reminder of the wonderful poet you really are, hope your health is ok. harry
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March 27, 2012 at 10:26 AM
sorry got carried away, congrats numer one and deservsingly so. harry
Sweetheart Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 9:37 AM
congrats Caroly on a stunning first place win for these excellent music melodies luv..
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March 27, 2012 at 9:27 AM
Loved what you did with these lyrics, Carolyn-hun! Just stupendous and though it takes a bit here and there from others, you made those words all your own. Such a well deserved first place win! Congratulations. Kudos to Tracie for her judging. Hugs, Cyndi
Richards Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 9:15 AM
Perfect song choices....some of my favorite all time lyrics, in your wonderful poem, Carolyn. Well done, and well deserved win!!
Long Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:51 AM
congrats on your win with this gem.. cory
Taylor Avatar
March 27, 2012 at 8:38 AM
Congrats on your well written, well deserved 1st Place win, Carolyn. Outstanding. Enjoyed. Great job, my friend. Best to you and yours. luv and huggs, Ralphie
Austin Avatar
March 7, 2012 at 11:58 AM
Don't know any of these tunes, Carolyn, but no difference, the poem is excellent. Love, daver
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March 6, 2012 at 5:33 PM
This is SMASHING! Tho' it's the Favorite Jewish Music Duo behind the song...for some reason it reminds me of the LEGEND in Black, Johnny Ca$h! Carolyn, I would like to thank you tonight again, on the one year anniversary of giving my poem "Open Sores" a Number One Spot on your :"March Madness" contest. You don't know how much that helped my confidence in the works! I used to simply chuck my poems to the trash or an old shoe box...That poem just placed #1 for the 3rd time on the Soup!
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Beautiful as alway Carolyn, loved this 'Simon and Garfunkel. I sm sure this will do well in the contest. Agape, Moses
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March 6, 2012 at 3:54 AM
Great job on this contest entry. You have made the words your own. A wonderful and emotional write. When God is your best friend, life perspective becomes more full...and joy can be found within. God bless you. Lovingly, Dane Ann
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March 5, 2012 at 7:42 PM
Simon and Garfunkel wrote many beautiful songs. You chose some great ones here. I was just listening to some of their songs on you tube last week. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda
Horne Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:54 PM
Lovely but sad piece, my friend
Fitzgerald Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 2:12 PM
Such a quality choice of lyrics they belong , good luck in the contest Carolyn , Hugs and best wishes ,Declan xxx
Maverick Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 1:48 PM
Hello Carolyn,, wishing you good results in the contest..) and also positivity in yourself and your poetic journey,, yours Joe..)
Fraser Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 1:01 PM
Fine choice of tracks to amalgamate into this fine poetry lyric Carolyn. Good luck in the contest with this gem :)
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March 5, 2012 at 12:24 PM
Excellent poem, Carolyn. Simon and Garfunkel was one of my favorite groups growing up, and you used lines from all my favorite songs by them. This one's a winner for sure. Love, Kim
Williams Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:21 PM
Carolyn this is just great, I love it, good luck..David
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March 5, 2012 at 12:20 PM
well done, this one is a toughy contest, I don't think I will attempt. Best of luck in the contest Carolyn
Long Avatar
March 5, 2012 at 12:20 PM
this was awesome good luck in the contest.. cory
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