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Finding My Own True Self

the sound of all thought
encumbered by self
escapes to freedom
unchained and released
with pranayama

in harmony
each cell listens
still-life poses
in hushed repose

asana
deep waves of
tidal breaths

centered
I am....

found





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For Tahera's Contest "Yoga"

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/31/2011 5:20:00 PM
Peaceful..I like "deep waves of tidal breaths," clever. Namaste, Scarlett
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Date: 5/16/2011 12:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Carrie. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 7:21:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Tahera's contest, have a lovely weekend....:)
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:54:00 AM
You are found at your center....for sure! I enjoyed reading this winning piece. Gwendolen
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:50:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your well deserved win.
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Carrie and you did it with one of my favourite forms as well.. love Wilma
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:29:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest of Tahera
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Date: 5/11/2011 5:24:00 AM
breathless, carrie.. your impressions take me to the top! congrats on your big win with all my hugggs! :)
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Date: 5/11/2011 4:59:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your wonderful winning poem in the Yoga contest with this exciting adventure into meditation land .. exquisite design in creativity luv.. enjoy another sweet success..
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:58:00 PM
An excellent write on YOGA.Best wishes---kashinath
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:17:00 PM
carrie, i love the way you carried it off, using a form that diminishes. Ending with Found. You are brilliant. I sure would place this one very high!
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