Finding Me

I carve a path out for me
trying to make it in this soulless city
confined to a big house
aspirations seem to drag out
sitting in this pink room
trying to catch my breath at noon
This heat is making me crazy
I am not sure where I'm heading
too many questions I don't know the answers to
I have too much time on my hands
too many thoughts swirling
Is this what they call the end of the beginning?
I have no clue
Do you?
Maybe I am inching toward the madhouse
A nasty feeling
a subtle thought
and suddenly it doesn't seem so bad
this notion though does make me sad
I have yet to see, what becomes of me!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Agustin Avatar
May 21, 2023 at 6:42 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
Mullick Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 6:14 AM
thank you so much
Sinha-Roy Avatar
May 19, 2023 at 4:23 AM
Nicely penned. True, such feelings come and go.
Mullick Avatar
June 10, 2023 at 6:14 AM
THANK YOU
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