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Such lovely lilac and crimson tones, As a rainbow of colours fill the sky, Radiant and beautiful soothes my bones, Takes me above the clouds so far and high. Captured in a moment of total bliss, Wondering all the time what is life for? Suspended in awe like a lovers kiss, Never felt like this to my very core. Love all around and it's time I was found, Beauty everywhere can't you see her smile, Smiling at you and smiling all around, It's time you gave love a chance for awhile. But leave me above the clouds, here I'll stay, I have found love in a different way. /|\ (Ten syllables per line) 31~10~16

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Date: 6/22/2017 10:12:00 PM
Congrats!!! my friend...well deserved Wolfie...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 6/22/2017 4:16:00 PM
Everything you write is great!! Nice win :)
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Date: 5/28/2017 10:16:00 PM
I like your choice of words and the - and the surprise ending "leave me in the clouds" :D
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Date: 3/22/2017 5:26:00 AM
Another lovely write. You are a Nature Boy white Wolf. God Bless. D.
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Date: 3/22/2017 5:33:00 AM
Yes, you are right, Dave! I am, and thank you /|\
Date: 2/7/2017 8:29:00 PM
very nice :)
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:32:00 PM
Thank you /|\
Date: 2/7/2017 7:43:00 PM
Beautiful
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Date: 2/7/2017 8:14:00 PM
Thank you kindly, Michelle /|\
Date: 2/6/2017 7:14:00 PM
Very impressive sonnet,White Wolf. Admirable. Solomon Ochwo-Oburu
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Date: 2/6/2017 9:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Solomon /|\
Date: 2/6/2017 6:09:00 PM
nice sonnet beautiful love it much
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Date: 2/6/2017 6:04:00 PM
This poem is so romantic and it makes me think about how good it would feel to be in love again. This is a awesome and sweet right.
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Date: 2/6/2017 6:02:00 PM
You have 'painted' a poem of beauty and grace.....really lovely.
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Date: 2/6/2017 5:21:00 PM
BEAUTIFUL SONNET!
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Date: 1/8/2017 12:36:00 AM
This is delightful and so skillfully rendered as to hide its structure entirely. Thus you had to necessarily describe it. Good job and fine placement.
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Date: 1/8/2017 12:57:00 AM
Thank you, Mark, very kind of you to say so. /|\
Date: 12/30/2016 1:12:00 AM
Congrats Rick. This is the best sonnet I've seen on here, flows like a stream.
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Date: 11/29/2016 12:59:00 PM
Wonderful, romantic sonnet my friend. I agree, tis a work of ART! A pleasure to read such smooth flowing verses.
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Date: 11/26/2016 7:52:00 PM
Rick, congratulations on your win, I love the setting above the clouds a place I wish to be . Beautiful painting :) . Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/26/2016 5:57:00 AM
tis is lovely...l o v e
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Date: 11/14/2016 3:26:00 AM
A beautiful work of art! Thank you!
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Date: 11/14/2016 8:18:00 PM
Thank you, Jane /|\
Date: 11/12/2016 7:13:00 PM
Hello Rick, I enjoyed reading your poetry.I got swepted up in your poetry.
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Date: 11/12/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. I'm glad to hear that /|\
Date: 11/11/2016 12:43:00 AM
a beautiful poem, well wrote Rick!
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Date: 11/11/2016 12:52:00 AM
Thanks, Jesse /|\
Date: 11/4/2016 11:05:00 AM
Hi Rick, I don't know how I missed this beautiful piece. I see congratulations are in order. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved : -)Alexis
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Alexis /|\
Date: 11/4/2016 8:06:00 AM
Very nice, Rick:) love the concept of love in your lovely poem:) congratulations on your POTD:)
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Date: 11/4/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thank you Jo /|\
Date: 11/4/2016 7:20:00 AM
I had to read the first stanza a couple of times to be sure of the beat. Quite a pleasant sonnet overall.
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Date: 11/4/2016 7:59:00 AM
Thanks Keith /|\
Date: 11/3/2016 6:54:00 PM
You are becoming a master at the sonnet Rick...congrats on the potd
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Date: 11/3/2016 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Tim, but I wouldn't go that far mate, Haha /|\
Date: 11/3/2016 9:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Rick - Beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/3/2016 6:16:00 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\
Date: 11/3/2016 7:52:00 AM
Back to say congratulations on POTD, Rick. Well deserved:)
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White Wolf
Date: 11/3/2016 6:15:00 PM
Thanks, Daniel /|\
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