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Such lovely lilac and crimson tones, As a rainbow of colours fill the sky, Radiant and beautiful soothes my bones, Takes me above the clouds so far and high. Captured in a moment of total bliss, Wondering all the time what is life for? Suspended in awe like a lover’s kiss, Never felt like this to my very core. Love all around and it's time I was found, Beauty everywhere can't you see her smile, Smiling at you and smiling all around, It's time you gave love a chance for awhile. But leave me above the clouds, here I'll stay, I have found love in a different way. /|\ (Ten syllables per line) 31~10~16

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Winged Warrior

Date: 6/22/2017 10:12:00 PM

Congrats!!! my friend...well deserved Wolfie...god bless...^WW^

Jeremy Smith

Date: 6/22/2017 4:16:00 PM

Everything you write is great!! Nice win :)

Annette Gagliardi

Date: 5/28/2017 10:16:00 PM

I like your choice of words and the - and the surprise ending "leave me in the clouds" :D

Dave Timperley

Date: 3/22/2017 5:26:00 AM

Another lovely write. You are a Nature Boy white Wolf. God Bless. D.

White Wolf
Date: 3/22/2017 5:33:00 AM

Yes, you are right, Dave! I am, and thank you /|\

Joan Donnelly Ellis

Date: 2/7/2017 8:29:00 PM

very nice :)

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 8:32:00 PM

Thank you /|\

Michelle James

Date: 2/7/2017 7:43:00 PM

Beautiful

White Wolf
Date: 2/7/2017 8:14:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Michelle /|\

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

Date: 2/6/2017 7:14:00 PM

Very impressive sonnet,White Wolf. Admirable. Solomon Ochwo-Oburu

White Wolf
Date: 2/6/2017 9:51:00 PM

Thank you very much, Solomon /|\

Daniel Miltz

Date: 2/6/2017 6:09:00 PM

nice sonnet beautiful love it much

Candace Hodges

Date: 2/6/2017 6:04:00 PM

This poem is so romantic and it makes me think about how good it would feel to be in love again. This is a awesome and sweet right.

Paulette Calasibetta

Date: 2/6/2017 6:02:00 PM

You have 'painted' a poem of beauty and grace.....really lovely.

Ralph Sergi

Date: 2/6/2017 5:21:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL SONNET!

Mark Peterson

Date: 1/8/2017 12:36:00 AM

This is delightful and so skillfully rendered as to hide its structure entirely. Thus you had to necessarily describe it. Good job and fine placement.

White Wolf
Date: 1/8/2017 12:57:00 AM

Thank you, Mark, very kind of you to say so. /|\

Morgen Farmer

Date: 12/30/2016 1:12:00 AM

Congrats Rick. This is the best sonnet I've seen on here, flows like a stream.

Robert Lindley

Date: 11/29/2016 12:59:00 PM

Wonderful, romantic sonnet my friend. I agree, tis a work of ART! A pleasure to read such smooth flowing verses.

Eve Roper

Date: 11/26/2016 7:52:00 PM

Rick, congratulations on your win, I love the setting above the clouds a place I wish to be . Beautiful painting :) . Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve

Just Jane

Date: 11/14/2016 3:26:00 AM

A beautiful work of art! Thank you!

White Wolf
Date: 11/14/2016 8:18:00 PM

Thank you, Jane /|\

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 11/12/2016 7:13:00 PM

Hello Rick, I enjoyed reading your poetry.I got swepted up in your poetry.

White Wolf
Date: 11/12/2016 8:22:00 PM

Thanks, Darlene. I'm glad to hear that /|\

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 11/11/2016 12:43:00 AM

a beautiful poem, well wrote Rick!

White Wolf
Date: 11/11/2016 12:52:00 AM

Thanks, Jesse /|\

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/4/2016 11:05:00 AM

Hi Rick, I don't know how I missed this beautiful piece. I see congratulations are in order. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved : -)Alexis

White Wolf
Date: 11/4/2016 8:19:00 PM

Thank you, Alexis /|\