White Wolf Poet Sonnet

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Finding Love:

Such lovely lilac and crimson tones,
As a rainbow of colours fill the sky,
Radiant and beautiful soothes my bones,
Takes me above the clouds so far and high.

Captured in a moment of total bliss,
Wondering all the time what is life for?
Suspended in awe like a lover’s kiss,
Never felt like this to my very core.

Love all around and it's time I was found,
Beauty everywhere can't you see her smile,
Smiling at you and smiling all around,
It's time you gave love a chance for awhile.

But leave me above the clouds, here I'll stay,
I have found love in a different way.
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(Ten syllables per line)
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Winged Warrior June 22, 2017 at 10:12 PM Congrats!!! my friend...well deserved Wolfie...god bless...^WW^

Jeremy Smith June 22, 2017 at 4:16 PM Everything you write is great!! Nice win :)

Annette Gagliardi May 28, 2017 at 10:16 PM I like your choice of words and the - and the surprise ending "leave me in the clouds" :D

Dave Timperley March 22, 2017 at 5:26 AM Another lovely write. You are a Nature Boy white Wolf. God Bless. D. White Wolf March 22, 2017 at 5:33 AM Yes, you are right, Dave! I am, and thank you /|\

Joan Donnelly Ellis February 7, 2017 at 8:29 PM very nice :) White Wolf February 7, 2017 at 8:32 PM Thank you /|\

Solomon Ochwo-Oburu February 6, 2017 at 7:14 PM Very impressive sonnet,White Wolf. Admirable. Solomon Ochwo-Oburu White Wolf February 6, 2017 at 9:51 PM Thank you very much, Solomon /|\

Daniel Miltz February 6, 2017 at 6:09 PM nice sonnet beautiful love it much

Candace Hodges February 6, 2017 at 6:04 PM This poem is so romantic and it makes me think about how good it would feel to be in love again. This is a awesome and sweet right.

Paulette Calasibetta February 6, 2017 at 6:02 PM You have 'painted' a poem of beauty and grace.....really lovely.

Ralph Sergi February 6, 2017 at 5:21 PM BEAUTIFUL SONNET!

Mark Peterson January 8, 2017 at 12:36 AM This is delightful and so skillfully rendered as to hide its structure entirely. Thus you had to necessarily describe it. Good job and fine placement. White Wolf January 8, 2017 at 12:57 AM Thank you, Mark, very kind of you to say so. /|\

Morgen Farmer December 30, 2016 at 1:12 AM Congrats Rick. This is the best sonnet I've seen on here, flows like a stream.

Robert Lindley November 29, 2016 at 12:59 PM Wonderful, romantic sonnet my friend. I agree, tis a work of ART! A pleasure to read such smooth flowing verses.

Eve Roper November 26, 2016 at 7:52 PM Rick, congratulations on your win, I love the setting above the clouds a place I wish to be . Beautiful painting :) . Thank you so very much for participating in my Sonnet contest Hugs Eve

Just Jane November 14, 2016 at 3:26 AM A beautiful work of art! Thank you! White Wolf November 14, 2016 at 8:18 PM Thank you, Jane /|\

Darlene De Beaulieu November 12, 2016 at 7:13 PM Hello Rick, I enjoyed reading your poetry.I got swepted up in your poetry. White Wolf November 12, 2016 at 8:22 PM Thanks, Darlene. I'm glad to hear that /|\

Jesse Zerlaut November 11, 2016 at 12:43 AM a beautiful poem, well wrote Rick! White Wolf November 11, 2016 at 12:52 AM Thanks, Jesse /|\

Alexis Y. November 4, 2016 at 11:05 AM Hi Rick, I don't know how I missed this beautiful piece. I see congratulations are in order. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved : -)Alexis White Wolf November 4, 2016 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Alexis /|\

Joanna Daniel November 4, 2016 at 8:06 AM Very nice, Rick:) love the concept of love in your lovely poem:) congratulations on your POTD:) White Wolf November 4, 2016 at 8:09 AM Thank you Jo /|\

Keith Logan November 4, 2016 at 7:20 AM I had to read the first stanza a couple of times to be sure of the beat. Quite a pleasant sonnet overall. White Wolf November 4, 2016 at 7:59 AM Thanks Keith /|\

Tim Smith November 3, 2016 at 6:54 PM You are becoming a master at the sonnet Rick...congrats on the potd White Wolf November 3, 2016 at 7:03 PM Thanks Tim, but I wouldn't go that far mate, Haha /|\

Anne-Lise Andresen November 3, 2016 at 9:38 AM - Congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Rick - Beautiful poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :) White Wolf November 3, 2016 at 6:16 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise /|\

Daniel Turner November 3, 2016 at 7:52 AM Back to say congratulations on POTD, Rick. Well deserved:) White Wolf November 3, 2016 at 6:15 PM Thanks, Daniel /|\

Charlie Smith November 3, 2016 at 6:51 AM Congratulations Rick, a most deserving POTD honor... White Wolf November 3, 2016 at 6:14 PM Thanks, Charlie. /|\

Chris Green November 2, 2016 at 3:45 PM Love comes in all shapes and sizes, but when we find the love we seek, it matters not what we see but what we feel. Nicely done Rick. White Wolf November 2, 2016 at 6:45 PM Thanks again Chris for your kind words /|\

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