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Finding God

A child is walking on the street crying Worn torn clothes and was trembling She had no destination where to go? Took out a paper and began to show. Help me! Help me! I have no one to see No money with me, give me to eat free Listen! I am a child of nine with no family My uncle and aunt beat me daily heavily. My childhood is passing without any care To do anything, I have no capacity and dare I am bored and wish to say to this world bye No mood to live more I crave immediate die. In the same time, a passer stopped to listen This kind-hearted then urged to her taken He took a decision to make her daughter His bravery proved as God as great savior. Bhaktapur, Nepal 10/08/2014

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Black Matta

Date: 9/5/2014 5:33:00 PM

I like it, I hope to read more about homeless kids and needy people, they deserve many poems from us.. at least.. Thank you//Blackmatta

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 9/5/2014 6:04:00 PM

Dear Blackmatta, many thanks for your short and sweet review on my poem. Regrads...Kamal

Faye Gibson

Date: 8/14/2014 8:47:00 PM

Lovely; congratulations on your win.

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/16/2014 6:30:00 PM

Thank you Faye Gibson Madam for your wish.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 8/13/2014 12:35:00 PM

Wonderful write Kamal n so is the win, huge congrats!

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/13/2014 3:50:00 PM

Thank you very much Dr. Upma. Kamal

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/13/2014 1:29:00 AM

I like the message in the poem. Congrats on the win, Kamal

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/13/2014 1:49:00 AM

Many many thanks for your sweet comment Dr. Ram Mehta Sir. Regards. Kamal

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/12/2014 9:26:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Far too many children face a cruel world with nobody ever caring.

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/13/2014 1:47:00 AM

Thank you very much Mr. Robert for your realization through my poem about the condition of the children. Regards. Kamal

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2014 12:29:00 PM

- Congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written, Kamal. - // Anne-Lise :)

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/12/2014 3:35:00 PM

Dear Anne, You have given great and inspirational comment. I am really impressed. Thanks and regards. Kamal

Jan Allison

Date: 8/12/2014 11:48:00 AM

a heartfelt and beautiful message. many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/12/2014 3:32:00 PM

Thank you Jan for genius comment over my writing. Kamal

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/10/2014 6:02:00 AM

What a fine heartfelt end with this spiritual write, Kamal

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/10/2014 6:51:00 AM

Thank Dr. Ram Mehta Sir for liking my poem from deep level. Best regards sir. Kamal

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/10/2014 4:52:00 AM

- Many children in the world like this in your write, Kamal - Touching and beautiful poem! - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice Sunday. - // Anne-Lise :)

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/10/2014 5:30:00 AM

Dear Anne, thank you very much for your appreciating comment on my writing and this is true that there are no one take care of many children in this world. And same to you have wonderful Sunday. Thanks and regards. Kamal

Arthur Vaso

Date: 8/9/2014 8:16:00 PM

What a fine piece of poetry, with a heartfelt and beautiful message.

Kamal Raj Dahal
Date: 8/10/2014 12:26:00 AM

Dear Arthur, Thanks a lot for your appreciation for your sweet and deep comment over my poem. Regards. Kamal