Kamal Raj Dahal Poet Rhyme

Finding God

A child is walking on the street crying
Worn torn clothes and was trembling
She had no destination where to go?
Took out a paper and began to show.

Help me! Help me! I have no one to see
No money with me, give me to eat free
Listen! I am a child of nine with no family
My uncle and aunt beat me daily heavily.

My childhood is passing without any care
To do anything, I have no capacity and dare
I am bored and wish to say to this world bye  
No mood to live more I crave immediate die.

In the same time, a passer stopped to listen
This kind-hearted then urged to her taken
He took a decision to make her daughter
His bravery proved as God as great savior.    

Bhaktapur, Nepal
10/08/2014

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Black Matta September 5, 2014 at 5:33 PM I like it, I hope to read more about homeless kids and needy people, they deserve many poems from us.. at least.. Thank you//Blackmatta Kamal Raj Dahal September 5, 2014 at 6:04 PM Dear Blackmatta, many thanks for your short and sweet review on my poem. Regrads...Kamal

Faye Gibson August 14, 2014 at 8:47 PM Lovely; congratulations on your win. Kamal Raj Dahal August 16, 2014 at 6:30 PM Thank you Faye Gibson Madam for your wish.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma August 13, 2014 at 12:35 PM Wonderful write Kamal n so is the win, huge congrats! Kamal Raj Dahal August 13, 2014 at 3:50 PM Thank you very much Dr. Upma. Kamal

Dr.Ram Mehta August 13, 2014 at 1:29 AM I like the message in the poem. Congrats on the win, Kamal Kamal Raj Dahal August 13, 2014 at 1:49 AM Many many thanks for your sweet comment Dr. Ram Mehta Sir. Regards. Kamal

Robert Lindley August 12, 2014 at 9:26 PM Congrats on your win. Far too many children face a cruel world with nobody ever caring. Kamal Raj Dahal August 13, 2014 at 1:47 AM Thank you very much Mr. Robert for your realization through my poem about the condition of the children. Regards. Kamal

Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2014 at 12:29 PM - Congratulation on your winning poem in: "Finding God" - Contest - Sponsored by: Gail Angel Doyle - Skillfully rhyme and beautifully written, Kamal. - // Anne-Lise :) Kamal Raj Dahal August 12, 2014 at 3:35 PM Dear Anne, You have given great and inspirational comment. I am really impressed. Thanks and regards. Kamal

Jan Allison August 12, 2014 at 11:48 AM a heartfelt and beautiful message. many congrats:-) Hugs jan xxx Kamal Raj Dahal August 12, 2014 at 3:32 PM Thank you Jan for genius comment over my writing. Kamal

Dr.Ram Mehta August 10, 2014 at 6:02 AM What a fine heartfelt end with this spiritual write, Kamal Kamal Raj Dahal August 10, 2014 at 6:51 AM Thank Dr. Ram Mehta Sir for liking my poem from deep level. Best regards sir. Kamal

Anne-Lise Andresen August 10, 2014 at 4:52 AM - Many children in the world like this in your write, Kamal - Touching and beautiful poem! - Good luck in the contest - Have a nice Sunday. - // Anne-Lise :) Kamal Raj Dahal August 10, 2014 at 5:30 AM Dear Anne, thank you very much for your appreciating comment on my writing and this is true that there are no one take care of many children in this world. And same to you have wonderful Sunday. Thanks and regards. Kamal

Arthur Vaso August 9, 2014 at 8:16 PM What a fine piece of poetry, with a heartfelt and beautiful message. Kamal Raj Dahal August 10, 2014 at 12:26 AM Dear Arthur, Thanks a lot for your appreciation for your sweet and deep comment over my poem. Regards. Kamal