Finding Bliss

Her only son is this remiss in
  that to advice, he won't listen

But her friends say, this find bliss in
  your son cries not when you French-kiss him
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DiMino Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 10:37 AM
Yep, I have heard of friendly mother's friends.
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:28 AM
'Friendly,' to put it mildly. 'Horny,' to put it succinctly. (I reserve 'friendly' for dogs licking my face. lol). Laughter and Levity, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 5:53 AM
She French kisses her son?? What? Did I read this wrong?
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February 17, 2022 at 7:55 PM
LOL! Wow, that must have been painful. We all have our painful moments. Thanks for sharing. For now surely you can laugh about it. Blessings, dear friend!
Wolf Avatar
February 17, 2022 at 11:26 AM
Actually, there's a (1971?) film production of 'Hamlet' (starring Nichol Williamson) in which Hamlet's mother gives him sweeping French kisses. I turned green because I was showing the film (which was a substitute for a better version of 'Hamlet' which wasn't on the shelves at Blockbuster that day) to an all-male class of future Orthodox Rabbis. Can't make this stuff up, Kim. Not any of it. Thanks for questioning my sanity. You're not the only one who does. My wife's number is... :) gw
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