Andrea Dietrich Poet Verse

Find Me Then

Find me then – when silence surrounds me;
when the sun has climbed down from his throne
and left behind magenta magic.
When I look out at night’s profoundness,
find me then, for I will be waiting -
like La Luna with her entourage
of stars. And when I am captured by
their beauty, come and see their glitter
in my eyes! Where I wait, find me then.

June 11, 2020 (based on phrase #1)
for nette onclaud's  Repeat The Phrase Poetry Contest

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Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 3:22 PM This is wonderful, soul captivating and with associated soft whispers. Wishing u the best in the contest.

Joseph May June 14, 2020 at 11:08 AM Find me then was a popular choice, I like the romantic ending to this lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win..

JC Brul June 13, 2020 at 7:37 PM This is more than a captivating piece! You took my breath away dear poet Andrea! Congratulations! Onto the top of my fave list! Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 7:41 PM wow, thanks, my friend

Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 7:23 PM Entranced in the whirlpool of your soothing words Andea. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2020 at 12:52 PM so inviting is your starry write, andie... warm congrats on your prestigious win in my contest...huggs

John Watt June 13, 2020 at 2:13 AM I love how you turned this into a sweet romantic write with your beautiful celestial references. What a great opening line! Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John

Quoth Theraven June 12, 2020 at 9:39 AM Andrea, Like to think such a day is coming for all who still dream. -Richard

Supraja Kannan June 12, 2020 at 9:25 AM Lovely!!! Such a beautiful verse... Thanks for sharing, Andrea... I loved it...

Joanna Daniel June 12, 2020 at 1:19 AM Beautiful picture painted, Andrea:) I think many wrote on this phrase..

Michael Tor June 11, 2020 at 11:16 PM La Luna tiene su amigas, las estrellas. Me gusta mucho!

Caren Krutsinger June 11, 2020 at 10:51 PM So lovely and romantic Andrea. Beautiful pen, my friend.

Michelle Faulkner June 11, 2020 at 10:31 PM This has a wonderful romantic flow - makes me think for some reason of Romeo and Juliet (with a happy ending!)

Gershon Wolf June 11, 2020 at 7:41 PM He who finds you, will have found a great treasure. Profound penning, Andrea! :) gw Andrea Dietrich June 11, 2020 at 8:07 PM that was so sweet of you to say, Gershon

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 11, 2020 at 4:05 PM Another beautiful poem, Andrea. 'La Luna with her entourage of stars"...simply stunning. :)

Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 2:18 PM Very creative Andrea incorporating the three phrases into this verse, struggling with this one Good luck in the contest Tom