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Find Me Then

Find me then – when silence surrounds me; when the sun has climbed down from his throne and left behind magenta magic. When I look out at night’s profoundness, find me then, for I will be waiting - like La Luna with her entourage of stars. And when I am captured by their beauty, come and see their glitter in my eyes! Where I wait, find me then. June 11, 2020 (based on phrase #1) for nette onclaud's Repeat The Phrase Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/15/2020 3:22:00 PM
This is wonderful, soul captivating and with associated soft whispers. Wishing u the best in the contest.
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Date: 6/14/2020 11:08:00 AM
Find me then was a popular choice, I like the romantic ending to this lovely write Andrea, Congrats on your win..
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:37:00 PM
This is more than a captivating piece! You took my breath away dear poet Andrea! Congratulations! Onto the top of my fave list!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/13/2020 7:41:00 PM
wow, thanks, my friend
Date: 6/13/2020 7:23:00 PM
Entranced in the whirlpool of your soothing words Andea. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
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Date: 6/13/2020 12:52:00 PM
so inviting is your starry write, andie... warm congrats on your prestigious win in my contest...huggs
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Date: 6/13/2020 2:13:00 AM
I love how you turned this into a sweet romantic write with your beautiful celestial references. What a great opening line! Congrats on your win, my friend ~ John
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Date: 6/12/2020 9:39:00 AM
Andrea, Like to think such a day is coming for all who still dream. -Richard
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Date: 6/12/2020 9:25:00 AM
Lovely!!! Such a beautiful verse... Thanks for sharing, Andrea... I loved it...
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Date: 6/12/2020 1:19:00 AM
Beautiful picture painted, Andrea:) I think many wrote on this phrase..
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Date: 6/11/2020 11:16:00 PM
La Luna tiene su amigas, las estrellas. Me gusta mucho!
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Date: 6/11/2020 10:51:00 PM
So lovely and romantic Andrea. Beautiful pen, my friend.
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Date: 6/11/2020 10:31:00 PM
This has a wonderful romantic flow - makes me think for some reason of Romeo and Juliet (with a happy ending!)
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Date: 6/11/2020 7:41:00 PM
He who finds you, will have found a great treasure. Profound penning, Andrea! :) gw
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 6/11/2020 8:07:00 PM
that was so sweet of you to say, Gershon
Date: 6/11/2020 4:05:00 PM
Another beautiful poem, Andrea. 'La Luna with her entourage of stars"...simply stunning. :)
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Date: 6/11/2020 2:18:00 PM
Very creative Andrea incorporating the three phrases into this verse, struggling with this one Good luck in the contest Tom
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