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Find Me Then

Find me then awake in showered gleam even midst the dim of bleakest night. Where love clings to curves of falling stars, deep in wishes gazed with eager eyes. Find me then unmoored by setting sun, gently blooming with a jasmine moon searching for the softest song in you. Lost in melodic light, find me then. Written 6/11/20 for Nette Onclaud's Repeat the Phrase Contest

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Date: 6/15/2020 4:07:00 AM
Rhonda, A lovely romantic write on finding, mixing it well with the growing night. This can cause goosebumps of expectations of a fine evening. Congrats for fine win on this write. Hugs. Mohan
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:36:00 PM
Thank you Mohan! All of your kind visits are appreciated. Blessings, Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 7:21:00 PM
"showered gleam", "curls of falling stars"...this is gorgeous and delightful with that dream touch. Congratulations on your win Rhonda. Much love :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:55:00 PM
Thank you, Aditi! I always appreciate your kind and insightful comments. Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 12:46:00 PM
a very sensitive read, rhonda... thanks for joining my contest and congrats on your silver award!...huggs
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, Nette, for the placement and continuing to inspire us with your contests! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/13/2020 2:14:00 AM
Ooo, I love the musical references adding to the romantic vibe. Great celestial imagery as well, Rhonda. Congrats on your win ~ John
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thanks, John! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 11:28:00 PM
A beautiful answer to a gorgeous prompt; good luck in the contest.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:51:00 PM
Thank you, Caren! Rhonda xx
Date: 6/11/2020 6:26:00 PM
the beauty in this yearning is poetic gold, dear poet
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:50:00 PM
Thank you, Frederic! Rhonda xx

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