Find Me Then

Find me then awake in showered gleam
even midst the dim of bleakest night.
Where love clings to curves of falling stars,
deep in wishes gazed with eager eyes.
Find me then unmoored by setting sun,
gently blooming with a jasmine moon
searching for the softest song in you.
Lost in melodic light, find me then.


Written 6/11/20 for Nette Onclaud's
Repeat the Phrase Contest

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Mohan Chutani

Date: 6/15/2020 4:07:00 AM

Rhonda, A lovely romantic write on finding, mixing it well with the growing night. This can cause goosebumps of expectations of a fine evening. Congrats for fine win on this write. Hugs. Mohan

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/18/2020 5:36:00 PM

Thank you Mohan! All of your kind visits are appreciated. Blessings, Rhonda xx

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/13/2020 7:21:00 PM

"showered gleam", "curls of falling stars"...this is gorgeous and delightful with that dream touch. Congratulations on your win Rhonda. Much love :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/14/2020 10:55:00 PM

Thank you, Aditi! I always appreciate your kind and insightful comments. Rhonda xx