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Find me then, when gilded ruby sky Adorns mauve twilight on canvas pink Pleasing ardor of magenta dreams Tinting smiles in brushstrokes tangerine; Find me then, when ocean's blue bosom Scintillates waves' vermilion passions As sun's orange glow folds in embrace Caressing kiss of love --find me then. June 11, 2020 Placed 3rd: Repeat the phrase poetry contest Nine syllables per line (hommanysyllables.com) Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Date: 7/11/2020 10:55:00 AM
Absolutely enjoyed your exquisite verse, Vijay.. I felt as if i could literally melt in your verse! So splendid and breathtaking, my friend.. Imagery is excellent! Many blessings..
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Date: 6/28/2020 12:36:00 PM
Hello Vijay, i can see the sunset in your poem. So beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/29/2020 6:32:00 AM
Thank you Darlene--much appreciate.
Date: 6/22/2020 1:12:00 PM
A wonderful write in every way Vijay, I thought I commented on this one already, sorry for the late comment but it's even better second read!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thank you John for your visit and much valued comments--much appreciate.
Date: 6/21/2020 5:23:00 PM
Vijay, Love this poem! Each and every word, each and every image is stunning! In my faves. Congratulations on the placement! Mala
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM
Thank you Mala--much appreciate.
Date: 6/18/2020 9:34:00 AM
Paintbrush of artist tying colors of flowers and emotions in a fall bouquet of love! Congratulations. So well done!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM
Much appreciate Frances--many thanks.
Date: 6/15/2020 3:25:00 PM
Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM
Thank you Funom--much appreciate.
Date: 6/15/2020 11:51:00 AM
Must say, glad I found your poetry.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM
Much appreciate, DM--many thanks.
Date: 6/13/2020 7:25:00 PM
Your imagery in this one is simply breathtaking! "Ruby sky", "mauve twilight", "magenta dreams", "vermilion passions"...this is incredibly full of enchanting emotions. Congratulations on your win Vijay. This is a a fave for me :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM
Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 6/13/2020 7:15:00 PM
a cornucopia of delightful colors and images. Congrats, Vijay. Wasn't that a great theme?
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM
Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.
Date: 6/13/2020 1:00:00 PM
you certainly painted a beautiful portrait, vijay... heartfelt congrats on garnering a medal in my contest... huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:33:00 PM
So very kind of you Nette--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/13/2020 12:38:00 PM
Beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win..
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 2:32:00 PM
Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.
Date: 6/13/2020 8:50:00 AM
Remarkably well-done, Vijay:-) Thorough enjoyment! Congratulations on your fine win!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 10:56:00 AM
Thank you Edward--much appreciate the kind feedback.
Date: 6/12/2020 9:13:00 PM
Oh my!!! You always paint such breathtaking images with your words. Again, I am in complete awe. I could wrap these beautiful colors around me. :) And linger. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM
Always a joy to read your comments--many thanks Brandy--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.
Date: 6/12/2020 7:51:00 PM
Who could not love this beautiful poem? Well done Vijay :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM
Thank you Heidi--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/12/2020 1:07:00 PM
I would love to "find you" when you are surrounded by nature's beauty, Vijay. Your poem has a magical feel to it. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 3:59:00 PM
So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.
Date: 6/12/2020 9:18:00 AM
Beautiful!!! I just love it. Reads like a winner... Thanks for sharing this lovely piece, Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 3:58:00 PM
Many thanks Supraja--much appreciate.
Date: 6/12/2020 1:10:00 AM
Great write,Vijay; the phrase repetition is, I think, perfectly timed. Very skillfully rendered, my friend.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM
Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.
Date: 6/12/2020 1:06:00 AM
A colourful poem, Vijay, sure to place high:)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM
Many thanks Jo--much appreciate.
Date: 6/11/2020 6:20:00 PM
Wow, Vijay, this a delight for all the senses! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM
Much appreciate Rhonda--many thanks.
Date: 6/11/2020 9:21:00 AM
Nice idea...I read one other...I like what you wrote too...I would have also liked, " Find me here"
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:22:00 PM
Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.
Date: 6/11/2020 8:51:00 AM
wow... this is gorgeous Vijay... a winner in my book... love the imagery in this one! best wishes in the contest... hugs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:21:00 PM
Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Sandy.
Date: 6/11/2020 8:40:00 AM
One of your finest Vijay. a sure winner.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:21:00 PM
Delighted by your visit and comments, Jeanne--many thanks.
Date: 6/11/2020 8:00:00 AM
Beautifully written with a touch of romance, you used the repeating phrases well Good luck in the contest Tom
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM
Much appreciate Tom--many thanks.
Date: 6/11/2020 7:28:00 AM
WOW wow. I love it. such a beauty. Love to you, Gina
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM
Thank you Gina--much appreciate.
Date: 6/11/2020 7:26:00 AM
Vertigo of poetic beauty, my friend, Vijay! Stunning imagery! Blessings
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM
So very special to read your comments my friend--many thanks, Demetrios.
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