Vijay Pandit Poet Verse

Find Me Then

Find me then, when gilded ruby sky
Adorns mauve twilight on canvas pink
Pleasing ardor of magenta dreams
Tinting smiles in brushstrokes tangerine;
Find me then, when ocean's blue bosom
Scintillates waves' vermilion passions
As sun's orange glow folds in embrace
Caressing kiss of love --find me then.

June 11, 2020
Placed 3rd: Repeat the phrase poetry contest
Nine syllables per line (hommanysyllables.com)
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Robertina B. July 11, 2020 at 10:55 AM Absolutely enjoyed your exquisite verse, Vijay.. I felt as if i could literally melt in your verse! So splendid and breathtaking, my friend.. Imagery is excellent! Many blessings..

Darlene De Beaulieu June 28, 2020 at 12:36 PM Hello Vijay, i can see the sunset in your poem. So beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. Vijay Pandit June 29, 2020 at 6:32 AM Thank you Darlene--much appreciate.

John Hamilton June 22, 2020 at 1:12 PM A wonderful write in every way Vijay, I thought I commented on this one already, sorry for the late comment but it's even better second read! Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:32 AM Thank you John for your visit and much valued comments--much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 21, 2020 at 5:23 PM Vijay, Love this poem! Each and every word, each and every image is stunning! In my faves. Congratulations on the placement! Mala Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:32 AM Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Frances Schiavina June 18, 2020 at 9:34 AM Paintbrush of artist tying colors of flowers and emotions in a fall bouquet of love! Congratulations. So well done! Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:31 AM Much appreciate Frances--many thanks.

Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 3:25 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:31 AM Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

DM Babbit June 15, 2020 at 11:51 AM Must say, glad I found your poetry. Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:31 AM Much appreciate, DM--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra June 13, 2020 at 7:25 PM Your imagery in this one is simply breathtaking! "Ruby sky", "mauve twilight", "magenta dreams", "vermilion passions"...this is incredibly full of enchanting emotions. Congratulations on your win Vijay. This is a a fave for me :) Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:30 AM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 7:15 PM a cornucopia of delightful colors and images. Congrats, Vijay. Wasn't that a great theme? Vijay Pandit June 23, 2020 at 9:30 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud June 13, 2020 at 1:00 PM you certainly painted a beautiful portrait, vijay... heartfelt congrats on garnering a medal in my contest... huggs Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:33 PM So very kind of you Nette--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May June 13, 2020 at 12:38 PM Beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win.. Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 2:32 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh June 13, 2020 at 8:50 AM Remarkably well-done, Vijay:-) Thorough enjoyment! Congratulations on your fine win! Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 10:56 AM Thank you Edward--much appreciate the kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole June 12, 2020 at 9:13 PM Oh my!!! You always paint such breathtaking images with your words. Again, I am in complete awe. I could wrap these beautiful colors around me. :) And linger. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 7:18 AM Always a joy to read your comments--many thanks Brandy--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Heidi Sands June 12, 2020 at 7:51 PM Who could not love this beautiful poem? Well done Vijay :) Vijay Pandit June 13, 2020 at 7:18 AM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire June 12, 2020 at 1:07 PM I would love to "find you" when you are surrounded by nature's beauty, Vijay. Your poem has a magical feel to it. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Vijay Pandit June 12, 2020 at 3:59 PM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan June 12, 2020 at 9:18 AM Beautiful!!! I just love it. Reads like a winner... Thanks for sharing this lovely piece, Vijay... Vijay Pandit June 12, 2020 at 3:58 PM Many thanks Supraja--much appreciate.

Lawrence Sharp June 12, 2020 at 1:10 AM Great write,Vijay; the phrase repetition is, I think, perfectly timed. Very skillfully rendered, my friend. Vijay Pandit June 12, 2020 at 6:55 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel June 12, 2020 at 1:06 AM A colourful poem, Vijay, sure to place high:) Vijay Pandit June 12, 2020 at 6:55 AM Many thanks Jo--much appreciate.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 11, 2020 at 6:20 PM Wow, Vijay, this a delight for all the senses! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx Vijay Pandit June 12, 2020 at 6:55 AM Much appreciate Rhonda--many thanks.

Arturo Michael June 11, 2020 at 9:21 AM Nice idea...I read one other...I like what you wrote too...I would have also liked, " Find me here" Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:22 PM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams June 11, 2020 at 8:51 AM wow... this is gorgeous Vijay... a winner in my book... love the imagery in this one! best wishes in the contest... hugs Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:21 PM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Sandy.

Jeanne Mcgee June 11, 2020 at 8:40 AM One of your finest Vijay. a sure winner. Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:21 PM Delighted by your visit and comments, Jeanne--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham June 11, 2020 at 8:00 AM Beautifully written with a touch of romance, you used the repeating phrases well Good luck in the contest Tom Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:20 PM Much appreciate Tom--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh June 11, 2020 at 7:28 AM WOW wow. I love it. such a beauty. Love to you, Gina Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:20 PM Thank you Gina--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis June 11, 2020 at 7:26 AM Vertigo of poetic beauty, my friend, Vijay! Stunning imagery! Blessings Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:20 PM So very special to read your comments my friend--many thanks, Demetrios.

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