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Find Me Then

Find me then, when gilded ruby sky
Adorns mauve twilight on canvas pink
Pleasing ardor of magenta dreams
Tinting smiles in brushstrokes tangerine;
Find me then, when ocean's blue bosom
Scintillates waves' vermilion passions
As sun's orange glow folds in embrace
Caressing kiss of love --find me then.

June 11, 2020
Placed 3rd: Repeat the phrase poetry contest
Nine syllables per line (hommanysyllables.com)
Sponsor: Nette Onclaud

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Robertina B. Date: 7/11/2020 10:55:00 AM Absolutely enjoyed your exquisite verse, Vijay.. I felt as if i could literally melt in your verse! So splendid and breathtaking, my friend.. Imagery is excellent! Many blessings.. Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 6/28/2020 12:36:00 PM Hello Vijay, i can see the sunset in your poem. So beautiful. Enjoy your day my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/29/2020 6:32:00 AM Thank you Darlene--much appreciate.

John Hamilton Date: 6/22/2020 1:12:00 PM A wonderful write in every way Vijay, I thought I commented on this one already, sorry for the late comment but it's even better second read! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM Thank you John for your visit and much valued comments--much appreciate.

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/21/2020 5:23:00 PM Vijay, Love this poem! Each and every word, each and every image is stunning! In my faves. Congratulations on the placement! Mala Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:32:00 AM Thank you Mala--much appreciate.

Frances Schiavina Date: 6/18/2020 9:34:00 AM Paintbrush of artist tying colors of flowers and emotions in a fall bouquet of love! Congratulations. So well done! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM Much appreciate Frances--many thanks.

Funom Makama Date: 6/15/2020 3:25:00 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM Thank you Funom--much appreciate.

DM Babbit Date: 6/15/2020 11:51:00 AM Must say, glad I found your poetry. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:31:00 AM Much appreciate, DM--many thanks.

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/13/2020 7:25:00 PM Your imagery in this one is simply breathtaking! "Ruby sky", "mauve twilight", "magenta dreams", "vermilion passions"...this is incredibly full of enchanting emotions. Congratulations on your win Vijay. This is a a fave for me :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM Much appreciate Aditi--many thanks. And a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/13/2020 7:15:00 PM a cornucopia of delightful colors and images. Congrats, Vijay. Wasn't that a great theme? Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/23/2020 9:30:00 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/13/2020 1:00:00 PM you certainly painted a beautiful portrait, vijay... heartfelt congrats on garnering a medal in my contest... huggs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2020 2:33:00 PM So very kind of you Nette--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joseph May Date: 6/13/2020 12:38:00 PM Beautiful write Vijay, Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2020 2:32:00 PM Thank you Joseph--much appreciate.

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/13/2020 8:50:00 AM Remarkably well-done, Vijay:-) Thorough enjoyment! Congratulations on your fine win! Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2020 10:56:00 AM Thank you Edward--much appreciate the kind feedback.

Brandy Nicole Date: 6/12/2020 9:13:00 PM Oh my!!! You always paint such breathtaking images with your words. Again, I am in complete awe. I could wrap these beautiful colors around me. :) And linger. I shall place this in my favorites. :) Brandy Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM Always a joy to read your comments--many thanks Brandy--much appreciate. And a special thank you for the FAVE.

Heidi Sands Date: 6/12/2020 7:51:00 PM Who could not love this beautiful poem? Well done Vijay :) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/13/2020 7:18:00 AM Thank you Heidi--much appreciate--many thanks.

Carolyn Devonshire Date: 6/12/2020 1:07:00 PM I would love to "find you" when you are surrounded by nature's beauty, Vijay. Your poem has a magical feel to it. Best wishes in Nette's contest! Hugs, Carolyn Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2020 3:59:00 PM So very kind of you my friend--much appreciate your kind remarks--many thanks.

Supraja Kannan Date: 6/12/2020 9:18:00 AM Beautiful!!! I just love it. Reads like a winner... Thanks for sharing this lovely piece, Vijay... Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2020 3:58:00 PM Many thanks Supraja--much appreciate.

Lawrence Sharp Date: 6/12/2020 1:10:00 AM Great write,Vijay; the phrase repetition is, I think, perfectly timed. Very skillfully rendered, my friend. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate--many thanks.

Joanna Daniel Date: 6/12/2020 1:06:00 AM A colourful poem, Vijay, sure to place high:) Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM Many thanks Jo--much appreciate.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 6/11/2020 6:20:00 PM Wow, Vijay, this a delight for all the senses! Best of luck in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda xx Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/12/2020 6:55:00 AM Much appreciate Rhonda--many thanks.

Arturo Michael Date: 6/11/2020 9:21:00 AM Nice idea...I read one other...I like what you wrote too...I would have also liked, " Find me here" Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:22:00 PM Thank you Arturo--much appreciate.

Sandra Adams Date: 6/11/2020 8:51:00 AM wow... this is gorgeous Vijay... a winner in my book... love the imagery in this one! best wishes in the contest... hugs Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:21:00 PM Much appreciate my friend--many thanks, Sandy.

Jeanne Mcgee Date: 6/11/2020 8:40:00 AM One of your finest Vijay. a sure winner. Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:21:00 PM Delighted by your visit and comments, Jeanne--many thanks.

Tom Cunningham Date: 6/11/2020 8:00:00 AM Beautifully written with a touch of romance, you used the repeating phrases well Good luck in the contest Tom Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM Much appreciate Tom--many thanks.

Regina Mcintosh Date: 6/11/2020 7:28:00 AM WOW wow. I love it. such a beauty. Love to you, Gina Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM Thank you Gina--much appreciate.

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/11/2020 7:26:00 AM Vertigo of poetic beauty, my friend, Vijay! Stunning imagery! Blessings Login to Reply Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:20:00 PM So very special to read your comments my friend--many thanks, Demetrios.

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