Find Me

Find me when blue waters turn golden,
dusk creeps in, sea immerses the sun.

     The soft pebbles and shells on the shore,
shall tell stories when I was there before.

     In my heart warmth of your love I carry
and in fond memories you will…. find me. 



Jan 18, 2017.
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Tarpey Avatar
January 30, 2021 at 7:56 PM
This is a wonderful poem . One of my favorites!
Dietrich Avatar
January 22, 2017 at 12:50 PM
a golden poem and win. Congrats to you!!
Carmack Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 11:28 PM
I remember when you posted this, I was checking the 'New Poems' link then and read your poem for the first time, hoping it would place and I am glad now to see that it has. Congrats.
Callus Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 3:19 PM
Lovely imagery followed by romantic thoughts make this a top winner....Congratulations, Meenakshi!! // paul
Onclaud Avatar
January 21, 2017 at 1:40 PM
a mellow yet solid write.. i like your allusion to pebbles telling stories... congrats in your fine slot and thanks for supporting my contest, meenakshi..huggs
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