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Of course
I want to explode.
I want my stars
my tears
my pain
to reach every corner
of this damned earth.
And maybe
just maybe
someone will pick them up
and won’t feel
so alone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 25, 2015 at 11:30 PM
NAOMI:) Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT LOVE~
Austin Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:10 PM
This has fine drama. I was captivated at once. Congrats on the selection. daver
Austin Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:38 PM
No big deal, but it is obvious that you have fine talent so keep posting. Love, daver
Gruber Avatar
July 21, 2015 at 4:28 PM
Thank you so much. I'm new here--is getting a poem selected a big deal or not so much?
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July 4, 2015 at 12:51 AM
Heart rending stuff, Naomi, a great first submisison. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I'm sure that you'll enjoy your time here, sharing and reading with us. Have fun. Viv x
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July 3, 2015 at 6:38 PM
Naomi, this is a sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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July 3, 2015 at 5:32 PM
Naomi, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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