Get Your Premium Membership

Finale' ... "dancing With the Leaves"

. Vintage russet leaf pirouettes one final dance Farewell performance

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/27/2010 9:14:00 AM
Perfect ,baby boy
Login to Reply
Date: 4/24/2010 3:40:00 PM
natural elegance, Carrie! congrats! jimbo
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 5:54:00 PM
A fine poem presentation Carrie for your win. Congratulations. Agape, Moses
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 12:53:00 PM
Lovely just lovely perfect internal form for haiku topic/setting/action/you effectively juxtapose two imagesin line 3 nature & the dance..boy are you a quick study lol Light & Love winner gal!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 6:22:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Raul's Descending Grace contest Carrie. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 6:15:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Raul's contest.. nice intriguing words for the photo..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 6:05:00 AM
Great Haiku Carrie........poetic vision Congratulations!!! Love Jeralynn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/23/2010 4:11:00 AM
Lovely written Haiku, Carrie! Really enjoyed reading this on my birthday. Congratulations on your win and thank you for your friendly comments...Have a nice weekend...Gert
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2010 11:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Carrie!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2010 11:15:00 PM
Carrie, congrats on placing 2nd in my contest...Raul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2010 7:42:00 PM
Rick is right, Carrie. This poem deserves an encore performance! Best wishes for the contest. Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2010 6:53:00 PM
Carrie~ I love it your haiku's are great It should be in the winners circle again my friend! Love Ya Laura :)
Login to Reply
Date: 4/22/2010 4:16:00 PM
These contests stir up some great ideas for us all. Soup Mail.
Login to Reply

Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry