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perfect smile as she sings her swan song dentures drop Written on 3/29/2016

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John Michaels

Date: 4/27/2017 2:46:00 AM

Thank you for bringing a smile to my face, Laura! Regards, John.

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 4/12/2016 11:41:00 AM

Congrats on your gem.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2016 4:29:00 PM

A most lovely write that presents itself with a smile:) Congrats on your fine win, Laura! // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:02:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed this one, Paul :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/2/2016 2:03:00 PM

Congrats on ur win.Very nice.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:02:00 PM

Thanks, Manmath :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/1/2016 11:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Although the real winner, will be the dentist!!!!! $$$$$$$ :) So funny!

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:01:00 PM

So true, Arthur :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 8:02:00 PM

haha. you get the award for most comical. I LOVE it.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:00:00 PM

Glad this brought a smile to your face, Andrea :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:24:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Laura..

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 1:59:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/31/2016 3:56:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Laura, on your win! ; )

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/31/2016 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! It was fun to write it :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 3:27:00 AM

Congrats Laura! I think this is the only entry I've read that made me laugh. How embarrassing would that be to have your dentures fall out in the middle of a song! Really witty work here, and how you incorporated it into "her swan song" ...

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/31/2016 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy! I knew it was a sent you, but wanted to enter it anyway. Glad you enjoyed my little ditty ;)

Lu Loo

Date: 3/30/2016 1:50:00 PM

aha! This is exactly what the contest is about. Good luck! :)-luloo

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/30/2016 11:38:00 PM

It probably won't place since it's a denying, but I entered it anyway :)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/30/2016 6:32:00 PM

It probably won't place since it's a denying, but I entered it anyway :)

Iris E. S-Lewis

Date: 3/30/2016 9:23:00 AM

I like first part.

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/30/2016 6:31:00 PM

Thanks, Iris :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/30/2016 12:57:00 AM

I love it, imagining her horror! A fun entry Laura! #7. ; )

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/30/2016 6:29:00 PM

Thanks, Connie! Glad you enjoyed this:)

Charlie Smith

Date: 3/29/2016 8:26:00 PM

Great entry Laura, best wishes

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 10:21:00 PM

Gotta have some humor, right ?! :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 3/29/2016 7:38:00 PM

Poligrip works the best! Love the humor, Laura. You send a very clear picture with this one. Peace and good luck:)

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2016 10:20:00 PM

Thanks, Daniel! I know this isn't what they're looking for...but what the hey!! :D