Finale

                  perfect smile

        as she sings her swan song

                  dentures drop

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John Michaels

Date: 4/27/2017 2:46:00 AM

Thank you for bringing a smile to my face, Laura! Regards, John.

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

Date: 4/12/2016 11:41:00 AM

Congrats on your gem.

Paul Callus

Date: 4/2/2016 4:29:00 PM

A most lovely write that presents itself with a smile:) Congrats on your fine win, Laura! // paul

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:02:00 PM

Glad you enjoyed this one, Paul :)

Manmath Dalei

Date: 4/2/2016 2:03:00 PM

Congrats on ur win.Very nice.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:02:00 PM

Thanks, Manmath :)

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/1/2016 11:32:00 PM

Congrats on your win! Although the real winner, will be the dentist!!!!! $$$$$$$ :) So funny!

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:01:00 PM

So true, Arthur :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 8:02:00 PM

haha. you get the award for most comical. I LOVE it.

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 2:00:00 PM

Glad this brought a smile to your face, Andrea :D

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/1/2016 2:24:00 AM

Congrats on ur superb win with this lovely write Laura..

Laura Leiser
Date: 4/3/2016 1:59:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/31/2016 3:56:00 AM

Back to congratulate you Laura, on your win! ; )

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/31/2016 6:01:00 PM

Thank you, Connie! It was fun to write it :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/31/2016 3:27:00 AM

Congrats Laura! I think this is the only entry I've read that made me laugh. How embarrassing would that be to have your dentures fall out in the middle of a song! Really witty work here, and how you incorporated it into "her swan song" ...

Laura Leiser
Date: 3/31/2016 6:00:00 PM

Thank you, Timothy! I knew it was a sent you, but wanted to enter it anyway. Glad you enjoyed my little ditty ;)