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Final Wish

I’m hoping my last poem’s a triolet After an unexpected roll in the hay Memories to keep Through a lovely sleep, Singing this ditty: Zippity-do-dah-day! Written October 18, 2022

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/28/2022 4:21:00 AM

sweet and cheerful ~

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/28/2022 8:48:00 AM

Thanks so much, Line. What a way to go!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 10/21/2022 2:04:00 AM

Zippity Dooh Dah Day or Un-Zippity Dooh Dah Day?

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/21/2022 8:52:00 AM

(chuckling) Either one will do, Caren! (still laughing)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/18/2022 11:32:00 PM

Lol, bowing out on a happy note. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 9:13:00 AM

Indeed!

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2022 9:17:00 PM

My, O my! What a wonderful --- way --- to go!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 9:13:00 AM

That's how I feel, gw.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/18/2022 9:16:00 PM

Lol fun to read Milton.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 10/19/2022 9:13:00 AM

Thanks, Michael.