Final Wish

I’m hoping my last poem’s a triolet After an unexpected roll in the hay Memories to keep Through a lovely sleep, Singing this ditty: Zippity-do-dah-day!
Written October 18, 2022
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Gauthier Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 4:21 AM
sweet and cheerful ~
Hankins Avatar
October 28, 2022 at 8:48 AM
Thanks so much, Line. What a way to go!
Krutsinger Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 2:04 AM
Zippity Dooh Dah Day or Un-Zippity Dooh Dah Day?
Hankins Avatar
October 21, 2022 at 8:52 AM
(chuckling) Either one will do, Caren! (still laughing)
Cunningham Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 11:32 PM
Lol, bowing out on a happy note. Tom
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Indeed!
Wolf Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 9:17 PM
My, O my! What a wonderful --- way --- to go!
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:13 AM
That's how I feel, gw.
Tor Avatar
October 18, 2022 at 9:16 PM
Lol fun to read Milton.
Hankins Avatar
October 19, 2022 at 9:13 AM
Thanks, Michael.
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