Final Song

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Soulful chorus
wistful cries,
guitar strums
last goodbye,

bereaved ears
melodies speak,
breaking hearts
rhythmic beats,

lyrics rain
mirrored skies,
shattered tears
brittle eyes,

as sombre
mourners sing

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Gary Radice

Date: 5/16/2023 11:51:00 PM

I really like the structure of your poem Joanna. I like how you describe the emotions of the song rather than writing direct lyrics to describe the loss of a friend. It's both clever and heartfelt. Cheers - Gary

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 5/17/2023 12:39:00 AM

Thank you. This poem is very special to me, I wrote it shortly after the death of my best friend. Have a lovely day.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/20/2023 12:59:00 PM

Nice song ... We are all passengers on this earth. No one will be here forever. Just always say thank you Lord ... " It is night then morning will come." A living ... Person.... Is... always ...better / because ...he " she" breathing.... well.

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 4/20/2023 1:41:00 PM

Thank you. Such beautiful words. I appreciate your comment and taking the time to read my poem. I wrote this after my best friend died. She was only 40. She got her wings just before because Christmas. It's a special poem and came straight from the heart.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 2/3/2023 8:56:00 PM

A lovely poem, Joanna, congratulations:)

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 2/4/2023 12:09:00 AM

Thank you. Have a lovely day.

JCB Brul

Date: 2/3/2023 5:20:00 PM

A very emotive piece with so much grace. Congratulations on your awesome win!

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 2/4/2023 12:09:00 AM

Thank you. I am happy with how it turned out. Some pomes are easier to write than others. This one wrote it self.

Sotto Poet

Date: 2/3/2023 2:05:00 PM

I enjoy the whimsical poem, Joanna. I adore the poetry you wrote. Congratulations on your win. and thanks for your comment and uplifting visit to mage

Jo Chamberlain
Date: 2/4/2023 12:08:00 AM

Thank you. I have recently suffered a bereavement, this one came from the heart.