Final Hour

The final hour has finally come, 
All too slow.
I wish it didn’t have to be this way in a room of white and blue, 
Connected to machines so they know the time has arrived.
Everyday has been painful but not today.
I don’t feel the unforgettable pain of my insides failing one at a time.
They said the test would help.
They would cure.
But they lied, I’ve learned never to believe the one’s wearing white.
All the test did was worsen me, hair falling pass my eyes to the ground below,
And I could nothing but wait for my final hour.
I could only listen to the whispers of grief from those around.
Why do you stand around and watch me shrivel away!
Why is it all you do is hurt me, make me cry! 
Why! Please tell me why I have to go, I’m young I don’t want to go!
But my pain is slowly leaving me, no strength left to fight.
My body slowly flowing with happiness. 
I see old family waving and I relies my hour is up.
My hour is up as the line runs straight for all to know

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/16/2011 8:48:00 PM
Thank you all means alot
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Date: 8/16/2011 8:57:00 AM
Evan, Congratulations on your first place win in this contest My Last Hour. ~Glenna
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your first place win. I'm one in white, hope you haven't been hurt by us. Lee
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Date: 8/15/2011 11:56:00 AM
so sad! I love your line "I've learned never to believe the one's wearing white" so powerful! congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 8/15/2011 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Robb's contest Evan. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2011 1:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your big first place. Love, Joyce
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Date: 8/14/2011 11:09:00 PM
Congrats Evan on first place win luv..
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Date: 7/20/2011 12:35:00 PM
So descriptive it painted a sad picture but an interesting one. Great write(:
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Date: 7/20/2011 6:33:00 AM
I have read your poetry today and in my mind it is an interesting and excellent piece Evan. I will return again soon to read more of your writings. Love, Carol
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