Kale Brereton Poet Concrete

Final Frontier

The
                                                big   blue
                                          Above and below
                                             A sea of stars 
                                        And oceans that flow
                                            A hint of green 
                                       Like an emeralds glow
                          I wonder how beautiful our planet looks
                                              To that star 
                                           White like snow?


Kale Brereton
July 14/18



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Lyric Man July 14, 2018 at 9:18 PM Kale.. creative delight!! Kale Brereton July 15, 2018 at 10:42 AM Thank you kind sir!! ps. Its supposed to look like a spaceship (on Word it looked better, not sure if its so clear on this format though)