Final Class At Faraday

There’s a bluestone building near the Calder, east of Castlemaine,
One hundred yards back off the highway, beyond a tree filled lane. 
For one hundred years this building stood alone at Faraday
serving as the schoolhouse where, the kids would learn and play. 

Six children and their teacher - the final class at Faraday,
now live in our folklore that will never fade away.
Survivors of a mass abduction in October seventy two;
held for a million dollar ransom in a hell that they went through.

School number seven nine seven was the setting for this crime.
Perfect with its seclusion; two desperate men had chose the time.
Ordering the teacher and six children into their van outside -
they were masked and carried guns so they wouldn’t be defied.

A ransom note left at the school warned in cold and chilling fact,
with threats of any apprehension how the captors would react.
There’d be a mass annihilation; what the State has got to do,
is be in Woodend at five a.m. for a scheduled rendezvous. 

The captors never fronted where they said they would that morn,
but good news travelled fast out of Lancefield just on dawn.
Mr. Thompson driving home to Melbourne was ecstatic when it come. 
Mary Gibbs the brave young teacher had kicked her way to freedom.

Stumbling onto rabbit shooters, when escaping while she could, 
after seventeen long hours held by Boland and Eastwood,
Mary Gibbs made sure her children were protected safe and sound,
but from that day at Faraday their little school closed down. 

Over years this bluestone school has been carefully restored,
though desks are gone, there’s varnished floors; there’s a new blackboard.
It’s a selling point for local wine where you picture children play    
lunchtime games amongst the trees at school in Faraday.

Six children and their teacher - the final class at Faraday,
now live in our folklore that will never fade away.
Survivors of a mass abduction in October seventy two;
held for a million dollar ransom in a hell that they went through.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 7/22/2019 7:43:00 AM
Such great story telling. So glad there was a positive outcome. Well done!
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 8/1/2019 1:14:00 AM
G'day Richard … the whole of Victoria were relieved. She was a very young lady, the teacher - thank you for reading and commenting Richard - Lindsay
Date: 7/21/2019 7:30:00 AM
Truly excellent ballad, Lindsay! It's gripping, descriptive, and informative. Janice
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Date: 7/21/2019 7:42:00 PM
Hello Janice ... and it's true. Thank you for posting a great comment Janice - Lindsay
Date: 7/14/2019 3:56:00 PM
A sad but tale but poetically and creatively as well as historically explained to us, very interesting - how can a human being be called such when they act worse that the scavenging predator the hyena, even they look after each others young - must have been a terrifying ordeal for those involved, Thank-you Lindsay, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/20/2019 9:26:00 PM
Hello Jennifer ... here in Victoria, we are so lucky that kidnapping is indeed rare. But too often on news he hear of it going on so often overseas, and doesn't always end well - thank you Jennifer - Lindsay
Date: 7/12/2019 4:03:00 PM
A awesome and interesting write Lindsay. Reading Tom's comment and hope they put him back in jail and threw away the key. love phyl
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Lindsay Laurie
Date: 7/20/2019 9:20:00 PM
Hello Phyllis ... this is a factual verse that kept us Victorians on edge for a number of days. Kidnappings rarely occur here, but we hear so often they can end in tragedy. Thankfully this one didn't - thank you Phyllis - Lindsay
Date: 7/11/2019 8:19:00 PM
Great historical narration, Lindsay. Riveting drama, poetically portrayed. Good one!! Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 7/20/2019 9:13:00 PM
Thank you the 'wow' comment Gershon. I really do appreciate it, and best wishes to you also - Lindsay
Date: 7/11/2019 7:00:00 PM
Very interesting verse Lindsay, I hadn't heard of it and had to google it, it said Eastwood escaped from jail and carried out another kidnapping, unbelievable. Tom
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Date: 7/20/2019 9:00:00 PM
G'day Tom ... it was a very tense time with those two modern bushrangers. The teacher and State Premier Thompson are heroes for putting themselves in positions to keep the children safe - thanks Tom - Lindsay
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