Final Amen Premiere Contest Winner

I ransack my mind…the blurred tale that cries On hollow tracks scarcely finding life's way The bleakest moans, the clearest views reprise-- A pounding shrill of angst which reels all day. Though a prayerful night quietly drains, Above, a communion with God remains. From my confined walls, moonlight slowly bleeds Ghastly this shadow grilling a leaked pen: And yet, one flint from heaven’s star accedes Endowing malaise its final amen. Shall I grow weaker and perhaps forget How double-edged illness comes with youth's rain? Oh where I recline, next evening won't set Dear moments when smiles are lucid again. Here... tidal bowl with apples soon to fade As breaths drop, pass through dusk’s advancing shade. Contest of Craig Cornish:God Knows Where I Am 6/6/2017

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Date: 9/20/2017 1:20:00 PM
This is gorgeously deep and brilliantly written. There was a lot of effort and thought that went into this one.The wordplay is so craftily put together. I love it
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Date: 6/25/2017 3:22:00 PM
Very spiritual poem, Nette. I feel you on this powerful introspective write. Most people are too cavalier in their life, when they feel they are not at death's door. Reconciling the sorrows of our sins w/the joys of grace is indeed a communion w/God at the throne of mercy. A truly memorable poem. Kudos on the win. Love always, dear.
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Date: 6/16/2017 7:21:00 AM
Congratulations on your beautifully deep poem, Nette, that has deservedly won the trophy:) amazing write:)
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Date: 6/13/2017 3:44:00 PM
A definate winner in my books, this is mighty fine verse nette, I have to fave this little marvel:-)
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:27:00 PM
bruisingly beautiful Nette – I am proud to be placed one spot below this treasure
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Date: 6/11/2017 8:23:00 PM
You have captured this sad story in the most moving and compassionate fashion, Nette. High honors are well deserved!
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:55:00 PM
Powerful write on this sad event Nette..Congrats on your win
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Date: 6/11/2017 1:25:00 PM
Congrats on your top win with this powerful poem, Nette! Janice
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Date: 6/7/2017 2:57:00 PM
- Oh dear Nette ... this was so sad - good luck in the contest - hugs and smile // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/6/2017 4:22:00 AM
Your poem is astounding--- wretched and tender in its poetical expression of a tragic event.
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Date: 6/5/2017 6:57:00 PM
seems no one could reach her, your poem conveys the sadness of her life so confused and empty, my entry not as poetic as yours dear poet...good luck
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Date: 6/5/2017 3:52:00 PM
Your poem is amazing Nette. I Will bet it is exactly what he is looking for. : )
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