Final

After that trip she sat at the end of his bed
and wanted sex
to claim him back
pretending nothing was off
always before if she offered he would
acquiesce
often in humiliation of his need
for she was stingy and ugly in bed
he turned her down
in a calm and final way that let her know
she was finished
humiliation was no longer the way to win him back
scare him back
take him back
he knew now the loving hand and mouth of a woman
and it was not this barter 
they had engaged in for too long .
Another womans power healed the great  bleeding wound he
tended for years thinking that pain was
marriage.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 23, 2009 at 1:30 PM
Congrats Veronica on this one "Final" ly being featured. Deservedly so. Vince
Mckenzie Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 4:06 PM
Congratulations on your featured poem interesting story indeed! Laura :)
Meadows Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 2:33 PM
congrats on being featured. check out some of my poesm
Meyer Avatar
July 22, 2009 at 11:46 AM
WOW ... This is so inciteful. Would that we could learn before years are wasted. Congratulations on being featured with your super poem. ~J~
Tugaff Avatar
July 21, 2009 at 10:50 PM
Congratulations on this featured poetry. Ernilando
Joseph Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:44 PM
Thank you - once again I am honored by having my work recognized.
Christian Avatar
July 20, 2009 at 12:36 PM
congratulations on your poem being featured, God bless you from diane
Fraser Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 2:41 PM
Congratulations on your feature this week, excellent write>>James
Brown Avatar
July 19, 2009 at 2:08 PM
Congratulations Veronica on your poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
June 13, 2009 at 7:05 AM
Honest open write. It takes two side by side, not one dominating and one victim. Vince
Devonshire Avatar
February 13, 2009 at 1:40 PM
Veronica, I have a friend who is suffering this type of humiliation now as he attempts to free himself of a woman who took advantage of his vulnerability. This rocks!
Parish Avatar
February 9, 2009 at 12:43 PM
When it's finished, it's finished...no holding on pretending. Good write Veronica
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