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To see your gaze light the firmament
To see your smile lift the sun
It’s your eyes I see as the moon rises
My heart hopes this is love begun

You gaze through the space, do you see me?
I watch in hope forlorn
But my heart I want to give to thee
You are the reason I was born.

My love I can only send
On rolled parchment now to you
My life on you depends 
For in truth you love me too

You gaze through the window 
I see you every day
You face lights up as I pass
 Please speak to me I pray

Although I am of lowly birth 
I am rich in love for you
Please grant me a next meeting
And we could start anew.

I will do it right this time
And ask your father’s grace
But we both know it now
Together is our place.

A sign, my love, from where you sit
And gaze each day t’wards me
I promise my life, my love, my name
As I promise to make a wife of thee.
MT © 30 /7 /2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ayala Avatar
August 20, 2014 at 12:54 AM
Beautiful write! Congratulations on a well-deserved win! Regards, Kika
Manassian Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 7:02 AM
OH MY MY MY...You ARE the Golden Girl. This is so so beautiful, Mandy. Oh...romantic and sweet. What a treat from you. A well deserved top win. Hugs, my dear.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
June 5, 2023 at 10:24 PM
Would you believe it has taken Harry's death to make me re-read some of my poems, he used to re-read and comment all the time, I was bad at that and missed out on some wonderful comments, thank you, Eileen xx
Mehta Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 10:40 PM
Enjoyed this lovely write, Mandy. congrats
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Hi there Dr Ram and thanks for the congrats xx
Mcintosh Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 8:06 PM
beautiful write and congratulations on your win. God bless you and happy writing. With love and prayers, Gina
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:29 AM
Aw thank you Regina xx
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 7:46 PM
A wonderful win with this lovely entry Mandy. Big Congratulations!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thank you Connie xx
Curtis Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 6:00 PM
Wow, Mandy, I see your heart was really into it, Congrats
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thanks Jerry xx
Gorelick Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 4:05 PM
A lovely write..congrats..Enjoy! BG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thanks Barbara xx
Gibson Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 2:44 PM
Very well done, Mandy. Enjoyed this winning poem of yours. Congratulations.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:28 AM
Thanks Faye xx
Lawless Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 2:11 PM
Congrats on the win.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thanks John xx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:25 PM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Mandy!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:27 AM
Thanks you Dr Upma , much appreciated xx
Allison Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 1:04 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Mandy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:26 AM
Thank Jan will be visiting your wok very soon xx
Zerbst Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 12:35 PM
Warm, sweet, smooth. I admire this poem immensely. Many different feelings have been written down in a way that the reader can feel them too. That's what I like to see. Many congratulations!
Horsman Avatar
August 4, 2014 at 11:04 AM
written in classic style, by a classy lass, one of elegance, one of the purist joy.. good luck in contest......
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:26 AM
as always I appreciate your comments harry and your support xx
Reese Avatar
August 1, 2014 at 5:24 AM
A very nice entry for the contest. It gives a very vivid picture of his thoughts to her.
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
August 17, 2014 at 2:25 AM
thanks Charles, it was a good picture to work from xx
Allison Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 7:45 AM
oh how romantic! Good luck in the contest. Hugs jan xxx
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
July 30, 2014 at 8:56 AM
Aw thanks Jan xx
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