Filament of Our Love

Play me like you would play your guitar
The strings of my heart
A phenomenal song

Play me like you would a piano
The white and black keys
A merger of our hearts

Play me like you would a violin
Gentle strokes to create 
The right sounds

The beating of our hearts
The movements of our bodies
In harmony, a demonstration of our love…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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September 20, 2010 at 1:18 PM
WELL ENJOYED YOUR POEM WILMA, HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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September 20, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Enjoyed this exquisite write, Wilma! Definitely goes to my favs. today! Love, Audrey
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September 18, 2010 at 11:09 PM
Love is sweet sorrow, the great one wrote, and sorrow shows great love this humble one concede ... Wilma, how beautiful your words bleed.
Knop Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 5:56 AM
Hey Wilma, so well written to compare emotions with music! Musiek is ook altyd 'n deel van ons as is liefde! ... Take care ... Gert:!)
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September 17, 2010 at 3:25 PM
I love the music you make with this sensual write...Love Michael
Wilson Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 12:13 PM
very sensual as the music rises and falls..really good Wilma..Take care~Deb
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September 17, 2010 at 9:01 AM
Just read your senryu on the woman who got "played," Wilma, and I like the way you turned around the concept in this uplifting write! Delightful to read, my dear. Love, Carolyn
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September 17, 2010 at 8:52 AM
I love how you use such wonderful instruments in your poem. Each one can deliver lovable sounds. Nice one >> James
Roberts Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 7:40 AM
another lovely piece, much enjoyed
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September 17, 2010 at 5:57 AM
A pleasant read - quite graphic Nick
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