Filament of Our Love

Play me like you would play your guitar
The strings of my heart
A phenomenal song

Play me like you would a piano
The white and black keys
A merger of our hearts

Play me like you would a violin
Gentle strokes to create 
The right sounds

The beating of our hearts
The movements of our bodies
In harmony, a demonstration of our love…

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/20/2010 1:18:00 PM
WELL ENJOYED YOUR POEM WILMA, HAVE A BLESSED DAY*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/20/2010 7:16:00 AM
Enjoyed this exquisite write, Wilma! Definitely goes to my favs. today! Love, Audrey
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Date: 9/18/2010 11:09:00 PM
Love is sweet sorrow, the great one wrote, and sorrow shows great love this humble one concede ... Wilma, how beautiful your words bleed.
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Date: 9/18/2010 5:56:00 AM
Hey Wilma, so well written to compare emotions with music! Musiek is ook altyd 'n deel van ons as is liefde! ... Take care ... Gert:!)
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Date: 9/17/2010 3:25:00 PM
I love the music you make with this sensual write...Love Michael
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Date: 9/17/2010 12:13:00 PM
very sensual as the music rises and falls..really good Wilma..Take care~Deb
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Date: 9/17/2010 9:01:00 AM
Just read your senryu on the woman who got "played," Wilma, and I like the way you turned around the concept in this uplifting write! Delightful to read, my dear. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/17/2010 8:52:00 AM
I love how you use such wonderful instruments in your poem. Each one can deliver lovable sounds. Nice one >> James
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Date: 9/17/2010 7:40:00 AM
another lovely piece, much enjoyed
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Date: 9/17/2010 5:57:00 AM
A pleasant read - quite graphic Nick
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