Notes About The Poem

Figuring It Out

my mind wanders
as through 
a dense forest
reevaluating
decisions made
across the years
paths taken
those avoided

isn’t life mysterious
thinking we have it
all figured out
only to realize
it’s chaos

at times beautiful
suddenly catastrophic
orderly yet demented

nothing short
of a miracle



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:44 AM
Yup, that's about right, ordered chaos, life as we know it today! Great write Line!
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, John.
Kiser Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 11:23 AM
It's all that and more; had to "fav" this one; smoothly unfolding with wonderful imagery.
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 2:17 PM
Thank you so much for your most appreciated visit and compliment, ML.
Sands Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 7:54 AM
Exactly! I do the same! So true...Well written!
Gauthier Avatar
January 17, 2019 at 8:20 AM
Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Heidi.
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