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He fought his way Through life against all odds And came out victorious. The enemies were many The battles innumerable The pain unbearable But He stood his ground Despite the beating Despite the cost. He faced malice He faced deceit He faced hate, and Also betrayal But He kept going Regardless hardships. He was cold He was hungry He was lonely, and Suffered a lot, But He stood his ground Despite the tortures Despite the hurt. His childhood stolen His youth compromised His manhood disillusioned Thus He had to accept He had to deny He had to allow, and Also to reject But He stood his ground Despite the pressure Despite the loss. He fought the tyrants He faced the despots, and Many wretched men But He pursued his dreams To build his future Regardless the toll Thus After many decades of fighting He stood on the top. © Demetrios Trifiatis 16 May 2021

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Date: 5/20/2021 8:15:00 AM
This optimism turned the whole tone "He pursued his dreams" and made me feel stronger.
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Date: 5/17/2021 1:03:00 AM
Demetrios, I love this Free Verse write, despite all adversaries this person stood tall and proud right up to the end, knowing he had faced and beat all trials and tribulations, and with God's blessing, as He was also proud of him, he had beat all odds and stood at the top. Amazing and thought provoking. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 5/17/2021 5:43:00 AM
I know very well the person in question, my dearest friend. Jennifer. He came from a very poor family. He lost his father when he was ten and his mother when he was fourteen. From the age of fifteen lived alone, working and studying. Immigrated to Canada where he continued working and studying. He got his, BA, MA, and Ph.D. in philosophy. Became a professor, an author, and was involved in politics running for the Greek and the European parliament. Now he is retired, writing poems. Thank you for your precious visit and comment. Blessings.
Date: 5/16/2021 4:15:00 PM
Dear Demetrios, I apologize for my previous comment, which was completely incorrect, and I believe I became sleepy while writing :) And this is what I meant to say: we are facing many extraordinary challenges, and it is extremely beneficial to find some light like this to wisely clarify the good path.
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Date: 5/16/2021 5:27:00 PM
It takes a great man to recognize a mistake and a greater one to apologize. I appreciate your honesty and integrity, my dearest friend, Lasaad. God bless you!
Date: 5/16/2021 10:28:00 AM
It is helpful to think in terms of your tutorial concerning some actions, as well. Many extraordinary views govern our lives! Have a wonderful day, my good friend Demetrios
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Date: 5/16/2021 1:09:00 PM
I have said what I had to say, my dearest friend, Lasaad. Thank you for visiting. Blessings.
Date: 5/16/2021 5:24:00 AM
This is a lesson that resonates in your wisdom words my friend. Such divine thoughts that guide life!
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Date: 5/16/2021 9:53:00 AM
Thank you very much for your gracious visit and comment, my dearest friend, Vijay. Stay healthy. Blessings.
Date: 5/16/2021 2:25:00 AM
A great message in your verse Demetrios, many times we think of giving up but we have to find the strength to keep going. Tom
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Date: 5/16/2021 2:53:00 AM
Thank you for your precious visit and comment, my dearest friend To. God bless you!

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