Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Rhyme

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- Fight With Blood and Tears -

The world so breezy
Everything seems so creepy
Hiding in the corners of fear
Lose attitude and pride with tears

All the beautiful dreams we had at night
what's the point since you never will fight
Pain builds mountain inside of me, all I see is blood
Screaming shouting og endless echos behind a flood

We all know that everything has gone wrong
I can not even explain with a poem or a sad song
Stop the carousel it makes me sick and strange
Our beautiful nature in negative change














  12.08.2017
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- Thoughts after reading: Ravi Sathasivam - Poem: "Global warming" -

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Maria Williams August 15, 2017 at 12:22 AM A poem that elicits a lot of thought Anne-Lise. Indeed Nature is in crisis. So good to know that people like you are behind the push to make people aware. Akkiina is also spreading the word with my poem 'For Shame'. A Fave from me...Maria xxx Anne-Lise Andresen August 15, 2017 at 3:24 AM - Yes, Akkina told me about it - a nice thing to do :) - I really appreciate your "fav.", visit and comment, Maria :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. August 14, 2017 at 2:15 PM Sad truth expressed so beautifully in this thought provoking poem, Anne-Lise. Excellent write. An instant fave. Love and smiles. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2017 at 2:29 PM - Many thanks for your visit, for a "fav." and your lovely comments, Freddie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel August 14, 2017 at 7:38 AM Sad truth which sadly can't be changed, well expressed, Anne-lise:) Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2017 at 1:21 PM - Jo, many thanks for your visit and your lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Afolabi Muideen August 14, 2017 at 3:12 AM Sigh... This poem is poem is penned beautifully. Well done for the insight write. Thanks for posting. Anne-Lise Andresen August 14, 2017 at 3:41 AM - Afolabi, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud August 13, 2017 at 2:39 PM sadly, it is true, anne... splendid work as always... happy huggs Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 3:15 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith August 13, 2017 at 1:06 PM I feel the same Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 3:13 PM - Tim, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May August 13, 2017 at 7:18 AM It's sad to see the negative changes taking place..powerful write Anne.. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 3:13 PM - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey August 13, 2017 at 5:00 AM This is an awesome write my friend! You have successfully written in rhyme Ann-Lise, Awesome job! You are right, we ar destroying the only place we can live in...I hope we will see the errors of our ways and try to fix what we have done...if it's even fixable! Great Work!! Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 5:12 AM - :))) ... not often I write in rhyme, Russell :))) ... I'm bad to rhyme in English - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis August 12, 2017 at 6:34 PM Destroying God's creation is the most heinous of crimes for it destroys the human race as well! When are we going to realize the dangers we have put ourselves and life in general! Your dynamic and beautiful poem my friend, Anne-Lise is a call to our slumbering consciousness. Hopefully we are going to wake up before our dreams become a huge nightmare! God bless you! hugs Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 5:24 AM - You have written several poems about the same theme, my friend - I hope it's useful and we get our eyes up - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sunlite Wanter August 12, 2017 at 6:09 PM So intense and fearful. We have indeed failed our Maker, but wonder of wonder he still loves us and tells us "Be Not Afraid." Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 5:18 AM - Sunlite, many thanks for friendly visits and great comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior August 12, 2017 at 4:56 PM We can make a difference Anne-Lise...starting with this great verse...plus one word at a time...god bless...(((HUGS)))...^WW^ Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 5:17 AM - Many thanks for friendly visits and great comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Lin Lane August 12, 2017 at 4:36 PM I'm not aware of your religious beliefs, Anne-Lise, but I believe God made beautiful things on the Earth, and yes, humans have spoiled it, but God has the power to restore, and He will. I can feel your sorrow, not only in your poetry, but it rings clear in your replies to comments. Keep your sunshine smile in tact. Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2017 at 5:16 AM - We must accept and respect each other Lin, no reason to be offended - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Lin Lane August 12, 2017 at 4:45 PM He's definitely disappointed with so many things, but man cannot govern himself, nor have we been good caretakers. But, one day it will all be as beautiful as it was in the beginning. My beliefs may offend some, but it's not my intention to do so. Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2017 at 4:40 PM - I believe God is disappointed with our actions here on earth, Lin - Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands August 12, 2017 at 3:45 PM This is such a powerful poem! Very well expressed. It really reaches the reader :) Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2017 at 4:19 PM - My thoughts go to the coming generations that get handed a broken nature, Heidi - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit August 12, 2017 at 3:35 PM I feel the pain you depicted about how everything has gone wrong, Anne Lise! You are right a sad song cannot explain. Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2017 at 4:10 PM - The nature becomes destroyed ... bit by bit - We are obliged to take care of nature, Vijay - When we also get global warming it will be a dangerous mix - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison August 12, 2017 at 3:00 PM you chose a fabulous poem to inspire you Anne Lise I read Ravi's poem it was very powerful indeed:-)we need to unite to stop the destruction of our beautiful world:-) hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen August 12, 2017 at 4:00 PM - I'm afraid it's too late, Jan - Is there a future for our children and grandchildren ? - Ravi's poem gave us something to think about - Thank you for your comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)