Fight - If Only For Love

The gust that holds your chest, immovable pride 
From zealous ancients, to this is say farewell. 
To this ardence I despair, hone your hatchet 
But not for death, for pride, for fickle lies. 

Imploringly I should stand upon those dead comrades 
Who lie in the cultivated foreign soil: gone, dead, no more – 
To speak the words you already know;
That this is you. 

I speak for life, I make declarations for love 
Sweet, spicy tasteless love; this is the only 
Protection needed, when metallic claws invade. 
The knowledge that out there, 
Someone, somewhere ultimately will care.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 3/15/2012 12:26:00 PM
Congratulations on your super win in Frank H's contest Bethany. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:09:00 AM
wow........congrats on the placement in the contest........~sashi
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Bethany Chipperfield
Date: 3/15/2012 11:26:00 AM
thankyou :)
Date: 3/15/2012 10:08:00 AM
Congratulations Bethany, a fabulous win xx
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Date: 3/15/2012 12:10:00 PM
awww thankyou :) xx
Date: 3/15/2012 9:53:00 AM
congrats Bethany on a fantastic win for this brilliant beauty luv..
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:08:00 AM
geautifully expounded and congrats to you on your win here Bethany
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Date: 3/11/2012 6:22:00 AM
I really like your art do you have a facebook?
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Bethany Chipperfield
Date: 3/11/2012 6:31:00 AM
yes I do, you can find me by this name
Date: 3/6/2012 2:09:00 PM
I especially like the last stanza, ties up the entire piece nicely. I like your style, completely different to my own, but I still felt able to relate. Great write
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Bethany Chipperfield
Date: 3/8/2012 9:47:00 AM
thankyou :) thats lovely of you to say
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