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Fifty Shades of Green

Jealousy flashed in Jade’s envious emerald eyes She’d spied her ex boyfriend walking towards the pine forest He was hand in hand ….with her best friend Fern! Fern looked stunning in her skin tight mint coloured jeans Jade wanted to confront them but she bottled out How could she have been so naive! Last time she’d seen Fern they’d sat and sipped Vodka and lime Jade had spilled her heart toFern Told her she thought her boyfriend was cheating on her Now she realised that Fern had cried crocodile tears with her - Her compassion was just a lie. Jade could never hold out an Olive branch and forgive them for their deceit 3rd March 2016

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Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2016 7:10:00 PM

Good for you. The product is more important than the contest. Still if they increased the numbers for contests everyone would have more time. I guess that is up to each individual.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/6/2016 12:06:00 AM

Maybe decrease the number of contests posted in a month lol I don't have time to turf out my non contest poems these days lol!:-( hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 3/5/2016 10:53:00 AM

Jan sorry you missed the contest. Great write. I am green with envy. A Fav.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 6:04:00 PM

the contests close quicker than I can write but I still like to post my poem even if I miss the deadline:-) hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 3/4/2016 9:19:00 PM

Hello Jan ... green is certainly not the colour of envy in your colourful poem - thanks - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 3/5/2016 6:03:00 PM

Thanks Lindsay I am envious I missed the contest lol:-) hugs jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 3/4/2016 4:33:00 PM

Jan, I just love where you took this theme, this is a winner to me that is for sure, so wonderfully penned and awesome, and I am loving it 7 ~

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 4:37:00 PM

Thanks Constance sadly I've not had much time or energy for soup lately and have missed several contests but still post my poems:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/3/2016 8:39:00 PM

Another great write, Jan :) Hugs dear friend

Jan Allison
Date: 3/4/2016 4:10:00 AM

Thanks Eve - am not at my best at the moment and slow at writing and posting:-( hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 3/3/2016 3:29:00 PM

I am green with envy of your talent Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2016 6:36:00 PM

aww thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 3/3/2016 11:59:00 AM

Excellent take on the theme Jan...We are starting the celebration of Irish Heritage for the next two weeks leading up to St, Paddy's Day....There will be plenty O'Green all around.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2016 6:36:00 PM

to be sure there will be lots of green around Tim:-) hugs Jan xx

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/3/2016 10:49:00 AM

Oh yes the contest asked for green as, this is number one for me Jan, although i see it is not on the winner's list...

Jan Allison
Date: 3/3/2016 6:35:00 PM

I'm not managing to keep up with the writing at the moment was too late for the contest but still thought it was worth posting my poem:-) hugs Jan xx