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Fiery Blue Eyes

Standing by her hospital bed, I didn’t feel the pain
Instead, I felt sorrow that she looked so very frail
Like a rose that’s been sitting in a vase far too long
Slowly losing petals that leave it looking like death
And I knew that it was her time to leave this place

Her strength had always been apparent to her family
She didn’t ever stop except to take a slow drag from
Her Winston, something many believed would kill her
Yet, she didn’t die from smoking, but from living longer
Than she might have expected to live when she was young

As I stared down at her closed eyes and remembered
Dread seeped through my veins, making me tremble inside
Leaving me with a melancholy that would lead me toward
Depression, then despair, and back into fear and tears
That rain down on my soul like a shower pours over the earth

I was drowning in my own words which would not come
Words of compassion and warmth, wailing out a echo of hope
That she might live through this mysterious illness that left her
Feeling like she couldn’t even open those bright expressive eyes
Which had always shown with compassion and insight and wisdom

When I left her there that night with a light kiss on the cheek
I didn’t know it would be the last time I would see her here
On this dismal ground where she had left me to live my life
Despite her death and the grim reminders of her beautiful spirit
Which color me in hues of blue, like her eyes, fiery blue







STRAND COMPLETELY NEW(6),any form,any theme Poetry Contest
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July 6, 2020
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 10, 2020 at 4:12 PM
So beautifully done; I see why it captured number one spot. Not easy to put these feelings in such exquisite poetic form.
Kauffman Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 12:50 PM
You have so perfectly described the process of leaving one we love, grieving and what we keep close to our hearts. Congratulations on your top win, Regina. Much love and many blessings to you.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your win. A great write. I have been there with both family and a very dear friend. Enjoy your win and day.........
Chiri Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 7:54 AM
Gina my friend congrats on your top win!;)
Mishra Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 6:56 AM
Such a heartwarming tribute to your loved one Gina. Your emotions melt my heart. Congratulations on your win. Much love :)
Brul Avatar
July 8, 2020 at 2:54 AM
A splendid piece that evokes empathy. You have a good heart dear Regina. This is a FAVE! Congratulations on your 1st place win!
Neumann Avatar
July 7, 2020 at 4:56 AM
That is an amazing tribute...
Romios Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 6:04 PM
Whoa, woman! What a very precious and headtfelt write. The imagery is outstanding....you have exposed your soul...a FAV for me. Panagiota. Thank you.
Woodrow Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 1:51 PM
Drowning in words that would not come...I know that feeling. A moving write :)
Islam Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 12:26 PM
Powerful write. Loved this.
Proxenos Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 11:11 AM
Hi Regina, A wonderful tribute to someone very close to you and someone you loved very much because the emotion is overpowering in this write. Kudos my friend Jennifer.
Pandit Avatar
July 6, 2020 at 7:13 AM
Every word, ever verse honors her memory, dwelling in sorrow of loss, yet delighting in what she left behind. I felt the emotions you conveyed, Gina--a powerful write.
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