Fiery

fiery

fiery red 'pon
horizon, cobalt clouds flow....
redbuds in full bloom


pines

sighing of the pines
charcoal clouds underneath....
bird song welcomes me

februaryhaiku

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Anne-Lise Andresen

February 28, 2023 at 2:36 AM

- Both are beautifully described, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2023 at 4:51 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

February 28, 2023 at 2:09 AM

Your haikus are so wonderful. Well done.

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2023 at 4:43 AM

Thank you, Victor for your high regard. I appreciate the visits. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

February 27, 2023 at 10:12 PM

I love the colorful imagery, with its sighs and song. Best wishes.

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2023 at 3:16 AM

Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the visit taking time to read and comment. Sara

Valsa George

February 27, 2023 at 9:32 PM

Lovely scenes both in the sky above and the earth below. The fiery red and the charcoal black--- together form a striking contrast. Both I enjoyed much, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick

February 28, 2023 at 2:29 AM

'Twas a beautiful sunrise even though it was not the one that I saw from which I wrote my haiku. Your visits give me inspiration. Sara