Fiery

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fiery fiery red 'pon horizon, cobalt clouds flow.... redbuds in full bloom pines sighing of the pines charcoal clouds underneath.... bird song welcomes me

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/28/2023 2:36:00 AM

- Both are beautifully described, Sara :) - hugs

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 4:51:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise. I appreciate the nice review. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 2/28/2023 2:09:00 AM

Your haikus are so wonderful. Well done.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 4:43:00 AM

Thank you, Victor for your high regard. I appreciate the visits. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 2/27/2023 10:12:00 PM

I love the colorful imagery, with its sighs and song. Best wishes.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 3:16:00 AM

Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the visit taking time to read and comment. Sara

Valsa George

Date: 2/27/2023 9:32:00 PM

Lovely scenes both in the sky above and the earth below. The fiery red and the charcoal black--- together form a striking contrast. Both I enjoyed much, dear Sara.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 2:29:00 AM

'Twas a beautiful sunrise even though it was not the one that I saw from which I wrote my haiku. Your visits give me inspiration. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 2/27/2023 2:33:00 PM

You look at everything as if they are a painting. Your sharp lens focused, zeroing in on the best scene - evokes strong emotion. :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 2/28/2023 2:20:00 AM

It would have been a cool painting. If only, one could capture the beauty of a sunrise. Your visits inspire me. Sara