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Fierce Love Tale


In the dark cottage where warm hearts abide,
Two souls entwined beneath the starry gaze.
Love that is fierce to shun or cast aside,
In the dark cottage where warm hearts abide;
As cabbage kissed by morning gentle tide.
In ardent whispers, they dance through the haze,
In the dark cottage where warm hearts abide;
Two souls entwined beneath the starry gaze.

In the dark cottage where warm hearts abide
Love that is fierce to shun or cast aside;
Like cabbage kissed by morning gentle tide.
In ardent whispers, they dance through the haze;
Two souls entwined beneath the starry gaze,
As timeless love, in times of waxing maze.

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Paige Hind

Date: 10/10/2024 5:11:00 PM

So lovely, and very sensitive. The refrains were breathtaking together.

Maria Williams

Date: 10/9/2024 11:49:00 PM

Outstanding Soto, For me, your poem evokes a reminiscent sense of intimacy of love and romance, while the rhythmic repetition and vivid metaphors accentuate the theme. The "cabbage kissed by morning gentle tide" adds an vivid unexpected image that blends the ordinary with the tenderness of love, all encapsulated by the refrain structure of timeless, among day to day challenges. Thanks for sharing your pearls of wisdom -Hugs Maria

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/8/2024 10:38:00 PM

A lovely constructed triolet. I love its emotions and fine combination that surpasses all the love in this world.

Bill Baker

Date: 10/7/2024 4:03:00 PM

I enjoyed this finely written Triolet, my friend. Nice to be able to read, comment and post poetry gain here at Poetry Soup. I hope to be posting again soon. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/7/2024 12:27:00 AM

We never get enough of so beautiful inspiring stories of Love.. we never get enough of true poetry of great worth.. Form and content a pure magic that entrances a thirsty soul! Always bewildered by your so artistic and creative mind and quill! So much a delight reading.. God bless you. Best regards.

Hiya Sharma

Date: 10/6/2024 5:41:00 PM

What an incredible triolet you've weaved with stunning imagery and poetic richness. Your descriptions are so vivid here, flowing beautifully with the emotions of love ~ these lines are just so beautiful "In the dark cottage where warm hearts abide", "In ardent whispers, they dance through the haze" Nothing is more timeless than 'love' itself... Wonderful refrains throughout and meticulous work in crafting this form so seamlessly. Sending best wishes and light always, dear Sotto.

Silent One

Date: 10/6/2024 10:45:00 AM

This poem is a beautifully structured triolet that creates an intimate and tender atmosphere, capturing a timeless sense of love and warmth shared between two souls. The repetition of lines reinforces the closeness of the two characters, while the imagery adds a delicate, almost pastoral touch to the setting.

Michael Tor

Date: 10/6/2024 9:11:00 AM

I think Arthur said it best Lasaad. You are a master of conveying feelings and emotions, choosing your perfect flowing words that impress us each time. A standing ovation I give you. Your poetry is as high as the bar can go. Your consistency in delivering great writes day after day is amazing.