Fields of Love

Her promising look

Her faint smile

Her innocent touch

Were enough to thaw the 

Winter's frost of mistrust 

And

Let his heart free to bloom in 

Spring's awaiting fields of 

Love!










© Demetrios Trifiatis
          26 May 2016
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Raha Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:28 PM
The world needs more people like you Sir.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:34 PM
Miraj, my kind friend, thank you for your gracious comment! We all have a mission to accomplish and we can achieve it if HIS path we follow!
Onclaud Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 10:46 AM
how enchanting is the magic of love.. beautiful, demetrios!..huggs
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:32 PM
Nothing is more enchanting THAN TRUE love! Thank you dearest, nette for your precious visit!
Sathasivam Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:38 AM
A beautiful write and so romantic too. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 12:31 PM
Thank you my dear friend, Ravi, for your lovely visit and comment!
Smith Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 8:25 AM
Very romantic. I like this side of you.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 9:04 AM
Thank you, Tim! The good Lord has put all the elements to everyone. It depends where we put the emphasis! Thank you so much for your kind comment!
Bateman Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Hallo Herr Professor!! Ich finde dein Gedicht hier ganz toll zu sein. Radiant, Innocent, and Full of Love and Promise. A beautiful write indeed. A "Seven"!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 7:41 AM
Mein freund, Gary, was fur eine schohne uberraschung! Es freut mich zehr Inhen wieder zu sechen! Thank you so much my friend for the wonderful surprise and lovely comments! Hope all is well with you and your book writing!
Andresen Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:14 AM
- A beautiful poem, Demetrios .... a7 - I wish you a lovely day - (Me .... Father's Day) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
May 26, 2016 at 4:48 AM
Thank you so much for your visit and wishes dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xx
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