Fields of Galactic Dreams

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Poetic Form: Rhyme

Inspired: 2023 November 12

*9th Place*
Lets Minichu on dreams
Contest Judged: 2023 November 24
Sponsored by: Mohan Chutani

Image: Planets Palms Fantasy Dreams by Wallpaperup.com

Stars fashion and project, twinkling fields of galactic dreams we fabricate, and perfect. Dreams can confuse although there's times we contemplate the muse We rise and meditate ... whys. Stars fashion and project, although there's times we contemplate, ... whys.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/24/2023 7:42:00 AM

Congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Keep on writing. Sara K

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/24/2023 7:47:00 AM

Thanks, Sara. 'Twas a fun/hard boiled egg write. Aloha, William

Ink Empress

Date: 11/13/2023 5:59:00 AM

Whoa this is definitely one of the best minichus iv ever read really. The flow and rhymes are just beyond exquisite and the way you’ve written “ Stars fashion and project,twinkling fields of galactic dreams we fabricate,” so ethereal and magical! How you’ve phrased words my friend: i also love the line “ dreams can confuse” so true. I believe this is a top winner: i am totally in awe: a fave for me. Goodluck

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/13/2023 11:15:00 AM

Aloha, Ink Empress. I am always impressed by your wonderful artculative words I find admirably conducive. I appreciate your fave of this rather wispy, by my meaning quick draft of dream related rhyming words to create, laptop being lengthier, and omgoodness--thank you, my friend. Aloha, William