Kim Merryman Poet Blitz

Field of Rest

In a meadow
in a field
field of daisies
field of dreams
dreams of fortune
dreams come true
true blue
true love's kiss
kiss a frog
kiss me quick
quick like a bunny
quick thinking
thinking of you
thinking about life
life worth living
life guard
guard your heart
guard your mind
mind your manners
mind over matter
matter of fact
matter of time
time of day
time travel
travel by plane
travel far away
away from home
away from it all
all or nothing
all is well
well done
well of water
water of life
water to drink
drink coffee
drink tea
tea with lemon
tea made in the sun
sun rising high
sun beams down
down to earth
down and out
out of patience
out of time
time to go
time to rest
rest easy
rest in peace
easy
peace

9/9/15

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Connie Marcum Wong October 10, 2015 at 4:56 AM This form is challenging Kim. I have only written one ever. Your talent shines in t h is one! #7 Kim Merryman October 30, 2015 at 10:11 PM Thank you, Connie!

Eric Boddie September 17, 2015 at 12:47 PM I have to tell you kim....this is such an artistic gem....full of Beauty, full of insight....I just Love the style in which your pen writes....;) Kim Merryman October 30, 2015 at 10:10 PM Eric, thank you for your encouraging comment!

CayCay Godwin September 16, 2015 at 6:26 PM Very good, well-written and enjoyable ... CayCay Kim Merryman October 30, 2015 at 10:08 PM Thank you, CayCay!

Anu Nayak September 15, 2015 at 1:47 AM Beautiful blitz dear Kim! Nice thoughts flowing with ease....loads of love, Anu:-) Kim Merryman October 30, 2015 at 10:07 PM Thank you for your sweet comment, Anu!

Dorian Petersen Potter September 12, 2015 at 1:10 PM Beautiful pen Kim! I really enjoyed reading your Blitz. A delightful piece!A 7! Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light God bless you!:) Love. D Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:47 PM Thank you, Dorian! So glad you enjoyed it! God Bless!

Joseph May September 12, 2015 at 6:13 AM Beautiful write Kim...I think this would have been a first place win.....hugs Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:46 PM Thank you so much, Joseph! I didn't write this one for the contest, but I appreciate your vote of confidence!

Sara Kendrick September 11, 2015 at 1:03 PM Enjoyed reading your Blitz poem..It would have done well in the contest..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:45 PM Thank you, Sara! This one wasn't meant for the contest, but I appreciate your encouraging comment!

Afolabi Muideen September 11, 2015 at 2:17 AM Wow! What and excellent write. I love how it was constructed it is beautiful and brilliant........A.M. Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:44 PM Thank you so much for your encouraging comment, Afolabi!

Ilene Bauer September 10, 2015 at 10:31 AM cleverly done, kim! i enjoyed this read and bet you had fun writing it... Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:43 PM Thank you, Ilene! I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser September 10, 2015 at 1:55 AM Kim, this is a blitz I really like with images to go plus the easy breathless passing of lines.. ~~Olive ELoisa =`) Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 8:42 PM Thank you so much, Olive, for your encouraging comment!

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2015 at 12:18 AM my goodness. Another blast from a blitz!! Way to go, but it looks like you did not get it into the contest in time. That is a shame. I can see you worked hard on this, Kim. Kim Merryman September 14, 2015 at 5:36 PM Actually, Andrea, I didn't write this one for the contest so its all okay. Thank you for stopping by to read and comment. I really appreciate it!