Fido's Fable

the
dog barks
oh so loud  
in his domain                     
and wakes up people in the neighborhood

* My first real attempt of a Tetractys poem. Please feel free with any suggestions if not correct :)
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Buhagiar Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Very well done, ~~
Crabtree Avatar
November 1, 2020 at 4:14 PM
Thank you, Victor. I really appreciate it :)
James Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 6:53 AM
My dog is bit of an over enthusiastic barker at times but he is still young, not had any complaints...yet! Emilia : )
Crabtree Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Thanks Emilia. I totally understand. :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 9:30 PM
No wonder one receives complaints. ~~
Crabtree Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 10:56 AM
He's a loud little doggie ;)
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