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Fiddling and Footling With the Super Duper Soupers

Well if it isn’t the Italian Princess herself! I just KNEW we’d finally meet. It must be our: Karma, Charma (Whatcha say we…Ow! Look, you left a mark) I swear to GOD I haven’t been drinking Deb! It’s YOU that’s making me all: Woozy, Guzzi (Hold me up whouldja cher? Ohh yeah) Wow, I’m trippin’ out Ortello! It’s like FAR OUT to rap with you man and those threads are like: Groovin’ Ruben (I’m an old hippie, what did you expect?) Well look who’s here! Andrea, the sonnet queen herself! What you drinkin girl? How bout some: Brandy, Andie? (Or maybe some ‘Southern Comfort?’ Ouch! You too?) OH-MY-GOD, its Ms. Claudon-I-I-mean ONCLAUD (gulp) you’re getting me all: Sweaty, Nettie! (Here, check my pulse) C’mon Ms. Richards! Let’s take a walk and have a nice long talk about poetry…Why do you: Tarry, Carrie? (I KNOW you’re busy but I’m SO lonely) The Flower of the East! May I have this dance? Whew! Lordy me...Do I detect the sweet aroma of: Jasmine, Yasmin? (This was SUPPOSED to be for your contest but I footled around and didn’t read the footling RULES)

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Date: 12/4/2013 3:25:00 PM
I love it when you address us super dupers..You have a way with it: : ).Im.going to favour this gem B-).Still smiling : )
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Date: 11/19/2013 8:55:00 PM
Oh Tim..this is a darling fun write....:-) :-) :-) :-)
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Date: 11/18/2013 3:49:00 PM
A very charming and fun tribute to some of the talented poets here on the Soup! I enjoyed the read! Great work, Tim!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments on my poem, "Let The Rain Fall". It really means a lot! :)
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Date: 11/16/2013 5:20:00 PM
Much fun! Tim! Thanks for stopping by!
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Date: 11/7/2013 9:43:00 AM
Well FOOT!!! Another invitation to a Soup gathering that got lost in the mail.... Great writing, Tim..... Jake
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Date: 11/3/2013 11:45:00 PM
interesting. ..luv..Linda
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Date: 11/3/2013 5:21:00 PM
I'm late in googling this little doodle of a footle, and though me thinks you are out of your noodle, Oh, lordy, it's oodles and caboodles of fun !!! !!
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Date: 11/2/2013 6:24:00 AM
tim!.. you wicked, sweet man.. if you so ever come here again, i'll make you sweat under the leyte or boracay heat, lol... you are a footle master! charming write..:) huggs
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Date: 11/1/2013 6:03:00 PM
cute one for us, Tim. How ironic that the one drink I ever tried was actually brandy. it Sucks though, like i imagine they all do!! Love when you footle!! I did another poem on the family of Wounded thunder.
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Date: 10/31/2013 2:11:00 PM
Hey cher, you cheating on me again ;) [well at least I got in the top 2!] no pretty in pink was not me LOL I was always a RED girl, I was never shy, I could read the dictionary out loud at 5! I never hid and if anyone gave me trouble I told them off ROYAL [have mouth will travel LOL, same old same old aye?] and I like to encourage you to make an ole gals heart go pitter patter by writing one about if we really meet [I can live vicariously!] Light & Love
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Date: 10/31/2013 1:08:00 PM
- Tim, I love it .... Even if you forgot ME!! - HAPPY HALLOWEEN! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)))))
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Date: 10/31/2013 9:24:00 AM
All the same it is a nice treat, enjoyed Tim
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