Fiddling and Footling With the Super Duper Soupers

Well if it isn’t the Italian Princess herself! I just KNEW we’d finally meet. It must be our:
Karma,
Charma
(Whatcha say we…Ow! Look, you left a mark)

I swear to GOD I haven’t been drinking Deb! It’s YOU that’s making me all:
Woozy,
Guzzi
(Hold me up whouldja cher? Ohh yeah)

Wow, I’m trippin’ out Ortello! It’s like FAR OUT to rap with you man and those threads are like:
Groovin’
Ruben
(I’m an old hippie, what did you expect?)

Well look who’s here! Andrea, the sonnet queen herself! What you drinkin girl? How bout some:
Brandy,
Andie?
(Or maybe some ‘Southern Comfort?’ Ouch! You too?)

OH-MY-GOD, its Ms. Claudon-I-I-mean ONCLAUD (gulp) you’re getting me all:
Sweaty,
Nettie!
(Here, check my pulse)

C’mon Ms. Richards! Let’s take a walk and have a nice long talk about poetry…Why do you:
Tarry,
Carrie?
(I KNOW you’re busy but I’m SO lonely)

The Flower of the East! May I have this dance? Whew! Lordy me...Do I detect the sweet aroma of:
Jasmine,
Yasmin?
(This was SUPPOSED to be for your contest but I footled around and didn’t read the footling RULES)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Chircop Avatar
December 4, 2013 at 3:25 PM
I love it when you address us super dupers..You have a way with it: : ).Im.going to favour this gem B-).Still smiling : )
Jones Avatar
November 19, 2013 at 8:55 PM
Oh Tim..this is a darling fun write....:-) :-) :-) :-)
Deschler Avatar
November 18, 2013 at 3:49 PM
A very charming and fun tribute to some of the talented poets here on the Soup! I enjoyed the read! Great work, Tim!...Thank you so much for the wonderful comments on my poem, "Let The Rain Fall". It really means a lot! :)
Goff Avatar
November 16, 2013 at 5:20 PM
Much fun! Tim! Thanks for stopping by!
Posey Avatar
November 7, 2013 at 9:43 AM
Well FOOT!!! Another invitation to a Soup gathering that got lost in the mail.... Great writing, Tim..... Jake
A   Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 11:45 PM
interesting. ..luv..Linda
Richards Avatar
November 3, 2013 at 5:21 PM
I'm late in googling this little doodle of a footle, and though me thinks you are out of your noodle, Oh, lordy, it's oodles and caboodles of fun !!! !!
Onclaud Avatar
November 2, 2013 at 6:24 AM
tim!.. you wicked, sweet man.. if you so ever come here again, i'll make you sweat under the leyte or boracay heat, lol... you are a footle master! charming write..:) huggs
Dietrich Avatar
November 1, 2013 at 6:03 PM
cute one for us, Tim. How ironic that the one drink I ever tried was actually brandy. it Sucks though, like i imagine they all do!! Love when you footle!! I did another poem on the family of Wounded thunder.
Guzzi Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 2:11 PM
Hey cher, you cheating on me again ;) [well at least I got in the top 2!] no pretty in pink was not me LOL I was always a RED girl, I was never shy, I could read the dictionary out loud at 5! I never hid and if anyone gave me trouble I told them off ROYAL [have mouth will travel LOL, same old same old aye?] and I like to encourage you to make an ole gals heart go pitter patter by writing one about if we really meet [I can live vicariously!] Light & Love
Andresen Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 1:08 PM
- Tim, I love it .... Even if you forgot ME!! - HAPPY HALLOWEEN! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)))))
Mehta Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 9:24 AM
All the same it is a nice treat, enjoyed Tim
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