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In Wonderland dwelled Tweedledum and Tweedledee, twin brothers; And genial next door neighbors, like the rainbow's changing colors. Employed by the Mad Hatter, at Vale asylum, in Looking Glass Land, The twins managed that institution well, like thunder, in command. Their homes and land were edged by a flowery fence, somewhat tall; As sturdy mountains surround the valleys, awaiting sunset's enthrall. Fittingly the twins shared many friends; like fun flowers, unforgotten, Feelingly admired in some fragrant, February, of the shocking garden! Other family flitted by for visits, as the floppy flowers posed, fuming; Factually thrilled to see the siblings, like sky and admiral sea, fusing. They lived in the houses of discontent, which ever lacked something, Where moon was missed at noon; and nights dreamt of sun coming. Semiprecious Mars sparkled rubies, on their street of sunset nights; When plump blossoms enacted a hula, with winds, of mystery flights. Usually nurturing, gracious neighbors, the twins were newly at odds; Over the weighty matter of a gourd rattle, like nomadic stars' chaos. Tweedledum played that instrument, in the lauded, Wonderland band; And Tweedledee had by chance broken it. Unforgiven, yet unplanned. 'Spoon leaf sundew' plants were supping, as windflowers rode gusts; And cuckoo blooms quickly went mad, like plum sky, at dawn's cusp. Dark red, pretty, Asiatic lilies, vanished in smoke of summer sunset; When sage added flavor to the gardens, in green days, not gone yet. Hapless Tweedledum and Tweedledee, learned they could not agree; And tempers flared, with hard feelings, like a volcano, red lava spree! At last, they decided to settle things, with the old-fashioned fist fight; 'And may the best man win,' thought both, like moon lit up midnight. The day of said battle dawned lavender, with people there, gathered; But, a monstrous crow swooped down, so twins and crowd, scattered! The crows grew very big in that region, and they could be a menace! The brothers shook hands and compromised, since family is precious. Tweedledum had been negligent, and Tweedledee had been careless; So, each paid half, for a new instrument, like the things living tells us. 'Tweedledum and Tweedledee Agreed to have a battle; For Tweedledum said Tweedledee Had spoiled his nice new rattle. Just then flew down a monstrous crow, As black as a tar-barrel; Which frightened both the heroes so, They quite forgot their quarrel.'

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Date: 1/8/2025 11:27:00 AM
Love your story Evelyn didn't think the twins were going to make up but you made it happen and the ending was a happy one. Really enjoyed your story telling you are very good at creating these Couplets. Blessings...
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/8/2025 10:07:00 PM
Michael, your gracious remarks are a source of delight. Thank you very much for your kind expressions. I hope the new year brings many joys. :)
Date: 1/6/2025 9:27:00 AM
You have a great talent for spinning a tale almost out of nowhere. This is an excellent story with a positive ending. Well done, Evelyn.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2025 8:50:00 PM
Thank you for the pleasure of your delightful remarks, Victor. I hope your week is nice. :)
Date: 1/5/2025 8:58:00 PM
This is an amazing tale. The truth is out, the twins don't get along. I'm happy that you reconciled these two. This was a joy to read.
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/6/2025 8:41:00 PM
Deepest thanks for your heartwarming response to this tale, Hilda. Wishing you many blessings for the New Year. :)
Date: 1/5/2025 5:05:00 AM
- You are a master at these Couplet stories, Evelyn :) - Love reading :) - hugs
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/5/2025 7:33:00 PM
Your wonderful compliment is received with pleasure, Anne-Lise. I thank you from my heart. hugs and blessings :)
Date: 1/3/2025 10:22:00 PM
nice story, it seems a garden of wonders here, this is quite beautiful and enlightening, reminds me a bible story, merci bonne année evelyn poet
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Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 1/4/2025 8:08:00 PM
Thank you very much for the lovely remarks, Yann. Bonne annee, mon amie. :)

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