Fiction Versus Friction

fiction is
friction
without the R
always smooth
cool
friction is
fiction
with the R
never smooth
hot
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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July 3, 2015 at 8:29 AM
I like your concrete poem, Dave. Not many poets write this form. This one carries a gem of truth.
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February 25, 2015 at 1:45 PM
What a smart play on words!! Read it through twice! Delightful ...and oh so true. hugs
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February 25, 2015 at 1:55 PM
Thanks Eileen, glad you enjoyed. Sometimes wordplay is an end in itself.
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