Fickle

The scent of seasons
changes with each drifting breeze—
as do all my dreams
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
August 15, 2024 at 12:06 PM
Hello Jerry Brotherton, yes the season does change with the scent of the chanfge of the season. enjoy your dcay my friend. /Darlene/
Wolf Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 10:35 AM
Excelsior! Wow, does this one ever resonate with this dreamer. Mine are more fickle than a bleeding pickle. ~ gw
Jones Avatar
July 7, 2024 at 7:24 AM
A deep thought and lovely. I have interesting dreams that fade as soon as I wake usually. Some rare occasions I remember and they come true like the foretelling of my father’s death. And the dream that my brother purchased a boat. Both came true and of course there was no way for me to know it’d happen as neither had told me anything of plans.
Brotherton Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 8:42 AM
as the years roll past, the dreams begin to fade.
Lawless Avatar
July 6, 2024 at 4:26 AM
dream on Jerry, dream on
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