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Fibro Rhyme - to the tune of Sweet Child O Mine

People don’t see, the pain that I’m in and nobody’s asking why & if they did, they wouldn’t care as life just passes me by Pins & needles & the aches & pains sneaky and sly they be all the stiffness & exhaustion too is not what people see Whoa, oh oh this pain of mine whoa, oh oh this fibro rhyme Now & then I wish I could have a smile upon my face I’d take the pain & lock it away in an unknown place I used to have much energy now all over I hurt times have changed, woe is me my life is much like dirt Whoa, oh oh this pain of mine Whoa, oh oh this fibro rhyme Take it away now, take it away take it away now, take it away Go go go go go, this time Take it away, this pain of mine.

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Date: 1/5/2025 6:56:00 PM
Love that song. My wife has suffered fibromyalgia 30 years
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Date: 1/7/2025 1:10:00 AM
Yep, great song and here's to your warrior wife. Living with Fibro is not easy. :)

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