Fib 42

I 
Can
Deadpan
Take more than
Any other man
This will be my unwritten plan
Continuing to take silence time and time again
From the most beautiful woman
Till I'm an old man
Madman
Can
I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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November 8, 2016 at 12:14 PM
Really nice and extremely thought provoking. I had a deadpan once, but once it burnt my lunch, I had to replace it. :) Nicely crafted piece.
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November 9, 2016 at 7:25 AM
Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL
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November 8, 2016 at 1:21 PM
Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL
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November 8, 2016 at 1:18 PM
Thank you Chris. Nice fib. LOL
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November 8, 2016 at 12:36 PM
The pan thing was a fib by the way. :)
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November 8, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Well, Master of Fibonacci:wonderful form Of poetry: Among poets you are a Storm!
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November 8, 2016 at 12:10 PM
Thank you so much Ovidiu. Fibs are a favorite pastime of mine.
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