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Fiasco

Fiasco Burnt down, fatigued, no feelings left, So devastated, world means no heft I am not a phoenix to rise from ashes Soul does not let receive new lashes. I am plagued with tortures of ill fate Downbeat and broken, it is time to rate My noble deeds and even wicked My Lord, I beg, don’t be too strict! Would love to live a century more, But locked for me the main door I knocked at it ten thousand times Then I came back with all that grime.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2016 2:58:00 PM
enjoying this one a second time. SKAT
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Date: 1/23/2016 6:33:00 PM
HILOLA, I'm just stopping by to enjoy your poem. Have a wonderful day. ** LINDA**
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Date: 11/19/2015 8:39:00 PM
Lovely write. SKAT
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Date: 10/26/2012 5:03:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Hilola. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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